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by KageKitsuneXXX

person nivell
schedule May 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awww, a perfect ending for this epic fic...thanks for writing this. What a ride. One of the best NaruSasu fics in fandom!
person cynaga
schedule May 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story!
person roro237
schedule May 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It was wonderful! You still had that wick sense of humor in there that I loved so much. The Neji conversation was funny and sweet sad:) Of course the boys and their unorthodox relationship is so them:) Giving Ms.Pink away was a nice touch. Then Naruto says I had to make sure you weren't the groom tickled me. You were clicking on all cylinders in the final charter. I really loved it! ^_^
schedule March 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so I reread this again, because I had to:)
it still is brilliant...( a term you had Naruto mutter and so happy you did because it is one of my favorite expressions
for wondeful / I picked it up from a Brittish sailor as he told me over beer that "sex was brilliant" stuck with me ever since!)


I realized I never did get around to leaving a review oh so long ago when I read the last post.
shame on me, but I have to say that I have in all this time not forgotten and every so often
flashes of Neji doing the chicken dance (such a standard wedding tune that my mind warped this non-existant scene).

thank you:)

I leave you with this:

"Ugh, I hope you simply chose to omit a few steps and that the transition wasn't that direct. In any event, Hinata will join Kakashi on my list of people with whom I shall never shake hands ever again."

I would ALWAYS shake your hand no matter what...I think... ...
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter. Will it be coming soon? :)
person Inazuma
schedule November 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I stayed up till 8 AM reading up to chapter 23 and am thrilled that the fic is still "TBC". I love the references, the cleverness, the drama, and obviously the hotness. Amazing work, definitely reading your other fics. Please update soon!
schedule August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeee!!! I'm so excited to find, after being away from this site for more than a year, that this story was still updating and is one chapter from finished!!

Congrats on completion, and I gotta say, I absolutely love how this has turned out. I spent last night catching up and today finishing it. I have the biggest, goofiest smile on my face right now. You have no idea.

This story is still one of my favorites! Keep up the great work!! <3
schedule July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am amazed!!! Really! This cha was SO funny! Especially Hinata swollowing that engagement ring - I was crying with laughter!!! And I was really touched while reading about Naruto talking to Fugake and Sasuke being totally nervous about it - WONDERFUL chap and TOTALLY amazing fic!!! Just plain awesome!!! I like it to bits!!! Thanks a lot for the pleasure while reading!!!! Amazing!!!
person siverfox
schedule July 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I totally spewed my chai tea I was laughing so hard...in the FIRST paragraph! Man, you're good! XD I loved every single moment of this story, especially this chapter. This first epilogue was pure spun gold, every word. Seriously. :D Hey, you know for the chapter where Sasuke tells Naruto that he loves him, that he's still the wind? Well, I was watching "Dirty Dancing" and the song "She's Like the Wind" just seemed to fit perfectly, not only for that chapter, but for this whole story. I figured since you like to attach songs to your chapters (I've gone and bought most of them, and love them all to bits, especially "Until We Bleed", "Love Like Woe", and "My World") you'd like to listen to that one and see if it fits for you the same way it did for me. XD Can't wait for the next epilogue, though the fact that it is the ast one is very sad. (sniff) =D
person richon
schedule July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love kiba's demand.. so funny, sasu and naru are finay together. Love this story !! See you soon with the end