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AHHH! So intense! I was just thinking when was Sasuke going to find out and then BAM! Well played. And cliffies are cool but I understand the need for an author to do them.... sorta lol.
Great chapter!

AHHH! So intense! I was just thinking when was Sasuke going to find out and then BAM! Well played. And cliffies are NOT*** cool but I understand the need for an author to do them.... sorta lol.
Great chapter!
p.s. I'm torn between whether or not I should be rooting for NaruSas or NaruNeji because I love both pairings.... ah, you're messing with my head!

Did you think I would not review on this site? Ha...as if...

Okay here are some observations from your dear stalker....(you know you like the stalkage don't lie KamiKitsune.....yeah that's what I'm calling you now....foxy goddess yeah)

1. You dear are brilliant at setting the flow and timing of a good fiction. Okay you know how Huge of a fan of your work I am....you hooked me with Saving me, then Serendipity and Role play made me a Fan For Life. Those three works are examples of how well you set up a scene to make it flow right into the next and your sense of timing in terms of humor is excellent, but this fiction right here puts those previous works to shame....it's just that good.

2. Your characters stay consitent, they don't seem schizophrenic or bi-polar...do you know what I mean by that? For example some fictions will start with a strong and willful character in chapter one, but by chapter five that character has become completely unrecognizable...some type of uke-fied version of itself.....totally unrealistic...I know that characters will usually grow and change due to circumstances in a fiction, such as trauma etc., but that is not what I am referring to.....anyway...Your characters stay true to themselves from chapter one until....well chapter now....so yeah that is another great hallmark of your writing.

3. *glares pointedly at Kitsune in bunny suit* I'm going to your country and getting rid of all maner of chocolate goodies and holding your bunny tail down to the fire damnit...how could you do this to me again? Evil Cliffies are Evil.....

Now get thee to your lovely computer and feed us some more....please...and thank you.

You go Neji!!! Naru definitely chose right. Thank god Sakura is finally outed. But this doesn't mean we like Sasuke. Their history speaks for itself. Sasuke just never really has Naruto's back when it comes to the most important things. I would feel used or like a convenience to Sasuke if I were in Naruto's shoes.

It's
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down.

Oh for God's sake Sasuke - you still can't see it? It's Naruto's fault how?? Never mind the Sakura bit - hopefully coming to a head now - he still can't get round the "I'm gay" bit?? I'm loving this story so much, all aspects of it are great - the writing, the plot(s), the characters, I could go on. I want to know what will happen, but then I don't 'cos that means that the story is coming to an end, and I don't want it to. I'm having a quiet pity party for Neji: he's heading for heartache, and that's so unfair (I've said that before, haven't I?). But he has caught a glimpse of that "special" bond from Sasuke's face, so he has an inkling (sorry if that is a British word!). The bit with the key - LOL! - bless him. Is Itachi coming into it? - bit of a tasty morsel there too. See you next time .....

sasu is losing narut, the love of his life and he just discover the mail. sakura be careful!!! sasu must be so angry !! i really looking forward the next chapter !! I love your story , i can't wait !!

Relax, I love your cliffhangers! It gives me reason to go back and re-read if I start jonesing for more of this wonderful story. LOL. That way I'll be up to date and fully informed when you are able to post the next riveting chapter. I have loved this fic, and I appologize for not reviewing every chapter, but I've never been dissapointed by what you write. Look forward to more.

*catches Kage bunny* Another cliffhanger?!!!!!!!

Yay that Sasuke finally knows the truth! :D & I really doubt Sasuke will suddenly crawl out from underneath his father' thumb so......

Argh!!! Can't wait to read more of this fic!

That wasn't a cliffhanger, my ass! I hope you hurry and update soon or I'll leave a very mean review within the week.

Aww got my fix! Got my fix! *dances around happily*
I just love this story, and when I see that it's updated... it just makes my day!
Can't wait for more - the plot gets better and better with every chapter. I hope you'll have time to update it soon
*goes back to read it again*