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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, no cliffhanger eh? Evil. Evil, evil, evil. But soooo good to read. Oh, now don't make us wait too long. I need to know how Sasuke is gonna confront Sakura and how she's gonna respond. Ooo, I hope they break up (I'm a sadist that way with those two). It's Naruto's turn again, maybe. But I'm kind likin' how you portray NaruNeji. Damn it! I usually review this on Y! Gal so maybe I'll just have to read it again there. It could only (hopefully) make the time till the next chapter fly by. Yes, time, you cruel cruel mistress, go by faster and give me the next chapter! Oh, and are we gonna finally learn just who and how many people have keys to Naruto's apartment? Hmmm? 'Cuz I think you could even make a multiple pairing (cough, slut Naruto, cough) sound sexy.
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
rofl lies that is a cliff hanger lol. the suspense of anti-climatic endings make me crazy >.<
I'm glad that Sasuke has finally gotten the dirt on Sakura. sasunaru must prevail XD
I'm glad that Sasuke has finally gotten the dirt on Sakura. sasunaru must prevail XD
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hate and love cliffhangers. As a reader I want to what happened RIGHT NOW, but as an author I fully understand the usefulness and necessity of a good cliffhanger. Plus, sometimes it is fun to giggle and imagine the shocked/pissed/disbelieving/needy faces of your audience.
But seriously though, I need you to update soon because I have to know what happens to that selfish, conniving, two-faced bitch. In the meantime I will enjoy myself considering all the things that could happen to her. Love you soooo much- keep up the good work!
But seriously though, I need you to update soon because I have to know what happens to that selfish, conniving, two-faced bitch. In the meantime I will enjoy myself considering all the things that could happen to her. Love you soooo much- keep up the good work!
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Neji stared at both Naruto and the key dubiously, but was too curious to see how this 'do over' would play out. He skidded the key across the table once again. "Here- this is yours."
Naruto stared at the shiny metal with reverent silence. "Really? For me?"
His bottom lip trembled and his eyes went as wide as dinner plates. Neji's lips twitched as Naruto slowly picked up the key with kid-gloves. There was the tiniest hint of a shimmer in the blond's eyes as he stroked the key tenderly against his cheek. "Oh, Neji."
Neji bit down hard in an effort not to laugh. "Just take the goddamn key, you fucking moron."-"
ROTFLMAO..!!!Naruto is such an idiot sometimes!! I love how you embody him so perfectly.isn't it ironic how kiba never really liked sasuke but is rooting for them t get back together? he's even counting down the days of 'when' and not 'if' lol. Neji is..finicky. I don't like him. They just don't click, you know what I mean ?? It bothers me so much!!
UPDATE!! My heart gives this fantastic WHOLLOP EVERYTIME I see kagekitsunexx and torrid at the top of the updates list..hehehe....
Shit..Sasuke finally found out huh? HAHA SAKURA IS FUCKING SCREWED LMAO..Tell that BITCH SASUKE!!! HAHA..
We love you despite the death threats love. Yes, you really have spoiled us with weekly updates :D Good Luck With Work!!<3
Naruto stared at the shiny metal with reverent silence. "Really? For me?"
His bottom lip trembled and his eyes went as wide as dinner plates. Neji's lips twitched as Naruto slowly picked up the key with kid-gloves. There was the tiniest hint of a shimmer in the blond's eyes as he stroked the key tenderly against his cheek. "Oh, Neji."
Neji bit down hard in an effort not to laugh. "Just take the goddamn key, you fucking moron."-"
ROTFLMAO..!!!Naruto is such an idiot sometimes!! I love how you embody him so perfectly.isn't it ironic how kiba never really liked sasuke but is rooting for them t get back together? he's even counting down the days of 'when' and not 'if' lol. Neji is..finicky. I don't like him. They just don't click, you know what I mean ?? It bothers me so much!!
UPDATE!! My heart gives this fantastic WHOLLOP EVERYTIME I see kagekitsunexx and torrid at the top of the updates list..hehehe....
Shit..Sasuke finally found out huh? HAHA SAKURA IS FUCKING SCREWED LMAO..Tell that BITCH SASUKE!!! HAHA..
We love you despite the death threats love. Yes, you really have spoiled us with weekly updates :D Good Luck With Work!!<3
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May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is it wrong of me to enjoy the NaruNeji when I am ultimately hoping for the NaruSasu to work out? Because I love Neji, I think he's great and all but Sasuke just makes more sense (even if her is being a selfish little bitch about EVERYTHING). I actually kinda hope Sasuke would just leave Sakura already, she's starting to get on my nerves. OH WELL. Can't wait for the next update :D
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May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ive been looking everywhere for good naru/sasu stories when i stumbled upon this and i'm so glad i did! You are a great writer and i can not wait till u continue this story!
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May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving the new updates, think this is the only fanfic I've ever come back to check for updates! Keep it up.
Have to admit finding Sasuke/Naruto's idiocy a bit lengthy now... but yay for Neji. And an uke? SO WORKS! Sasuke is such an annoying little brat atm! Hope he comes to soon.
Sort of feel like I'm waiting for Ino to suddenly realise what the actual DEAL is between Sasuke/Naruto. Poor Sakura :(
Love love love :)
Have to admit finding Sasuke/Naruto's idiocy a bit lengthy now... but yay for Neji. And an uke? SO WORKS! Sasuke is such an annoying little brat atm! Hope he comes to soon.
Sort of feel like I'm waiting for Ino to suddenly realise what the actual DEAL is between Sasuke/Naruto. Poor Sakura :(
Love love love :)
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May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh Gawd the ending! I was literally rolling on the floor (my couch) laughing my ass off XDDDD
I simply cannot wait for more! 8DDDD
I simply cannot wait for more! 8DDDD
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May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg !!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is fantastic! I've been rereading it and everytime I fine something new to think about:) Like Sakura thinking 'Naruto had probably been too much of a looming and impeding presence in Sasuke's life and subsequently, their marriage'. That just sounds like Mrs.Uchiha Pink it's all Naruto fault! Will she ever see what is right in front of her?! Can she become the hero? I think you have written her well:) At this point even Sasuke telling her he's gay wont register in her mind will it? I can't wait to see what you're going to do with her:) But of course my favorite plot going is Sasuke fining Neji there!!! I just had to drop you a few more lines. I so love your story and your beginning and ending comments crack me up ^_^