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May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much. The only thing I can really say I hate is the time it takes for
a new page to come out!
a new page to come out!
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why must you toy with my emotions!?!?!? WHY!?!?! What have I done to you!?! Didn't I offer you baked goods!? Didn't I sprinkle love on the ground you walk on!? Offer to have YOUR BABIES!?!?!??! Ah.. Did i offer that last one? =O I'm sure your writings have merited several fangirl marriage proposes by now; including the bearing of the chlidrens... hmm.. Tehehehe I Love YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU sooooooooooooo MUCH! Please update soon if you have even the smallest bit of concern over my well being! It's not like I'm saying I'm going to go on hunger strike or anything until your next update *Put a padlock on the fridge* It's just... Yeah! ~xoxox
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH HOW DARE YOU LEAVE THIS CLIFFHANGER!
GET YOUR BUTT ONLINE AND POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
*raises pitchfork angrily*
GET YOUR BUTT ONLINE AND POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
*raises pitchfork angrily*
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, such a wonderful cliff hanger! I'm loving this story
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dear KageKitsune XXX,
I think you are a delightfully talented writer. I find your development of Sasuke's and Naruto's characters surprisingly in accordance with the original, especially considering this is an AU. Two little things though, maybe three by the time I'm done:
1.)Is this a world of ninjas AND RL...actions, or institutions as it were? I am just a tad bit confused on that point.
2.) Do you think that Neji, Sasuke, and Naruto could all end up together and fitting together? Even though Sasuke has been awful and downright emotionally abusive towards Naruto...they fit. It may not be sensible but neither was it for Mrs. Lovette and Sweeney Todd, and their relationship was symbiotic enough. Until he *SPOILERS!* threw her into that oven to bake to death. It's just that the way you've written Neji, I would be hurt if were to end up alone. -Darn great writers that make you care about their fictional characters! Why am I emotionally invested in this?! Grrrr.) If you can't see that working or you don't believe it could, whenever you have the time -though before the next...five chapters are put up. No rush though!- check out 'Constellations' and 'All In'. Both are written by loraney, an author here on ADFF. Inspired in part by Zrina and her tale 'The Sound of Dreams', they are beautifully done and I believe are now complete. Even if you do decide to leave Neji out in the cold -At least give him Gaara to play with! He'll always be warm...from running...away...- do skim through those stories. They can change your life. -Just like your story WAS doing...-
Which brings me to point number
3.) How dare you administer that, that ... clifhanger! I despise that ridiculous plot device with all the power of the Winds, Rain, and Sun and Moon above. Ever single time I come across one of them, especially when I'm reading a really good story I wish to leap into my ether net cord, travel through the World Wide Web and shake the beauteous words from the authors fingertips, like precious drops of crystalline water from a fountain in an Oasis of AmShere! Do not try my my great patience again with this fool hardy trick lest I be forced to unleash my unfathomable wrrrrrath down upon your head! Behold! Up in the sky! 'Tis a mighty thundercloud! It will not restrain its bolts of fury for long. Be warned!
I am truly enjoying your story, though. I've never checked this often for updates! I feel kind of silly. Heehee!
Most Sincerely,
Lady B
I think you are a delightfully talented writer. I find your development of Sasuke's and Naruto's characters surprisingly in accordance with the original, especially considering this is an AU. Two little things though, maybe three by the time I'm done:
1.)Is this a world of ninjas AND RL...actions, or institutions as it were? I am just a tad bit confused on that point.
2.) Do you think that Neji, Sasuke, and Naruto could all end up together and fitting together? Even though Sasuke has been awful and downright emotionally abusive towards Naruto...they fit. It may not be sensible but neither was it for Mrs. Lovette and Sweeney Todd, and their relationship was symbiotic enough. Until he *SPOILERS!* threw her into that oven to bake to death. It's just that the way you've written Neji, I would be hurt if were to end up alone. -Darn great writers that make you care about their fictional characters! Why am I emotionally invested in this?! Grrrr.) If you can't see that working or you don't believe it could, whenever you have the time -though before the next...five chapters are put up. No rush though!- check out 'Constellations' and 'All In'. Both are written by loraney, an author here on ADFF. Inspired in part by Zrina and her tale 'The Sound of Dreams', they are beautifully done and I believe are now complete. Even if you do decide to leave Neji out in the cold -At least give him Gaara to play with! He'll always be warm...from running...away...- do skim through those stories. They can change your life. -Just like your story WAS doing...-
Which brings me to point number
3.) How dare you administer that, that ... clifhanger! I despise that ridiculous plot device with all the power of the Winds, Rain, and Sun and Moon above. Ever single time I come across one of them, especially when I'm reading a really good story I wish to leap into my ether net cord, travel through the World Wide Web and shake the beauteous words from the authors fingertips, like precious drops of crystalline water from a fountain in an Oasis of AmShere! Do not try my my great patience again with this fool hardy trick lest I be forced to unleash my unfathomable wrrrrrath down upon your head! Behold! Up in the sky! 'Tis a mighty thundercloud! It will not restrain its bolts of fury for long. Be warned!
I am truly enjoying your story, though. I've never checked this often for updates! I feel kind of silly. Heehee!
Most Sincerely,
Lady B
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great chp!! can't waaaait o.O
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh god.. Is Sasuke going to kill Naruto or Neji or both?! This can't possibly have a happy ending, it just can't..
Christ, I don't know who I want to hurt the most! As usual the choice is between Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura. Maybe Sakura because she started this mayhem and can't understand that Sasuke will never love her, but it could also be Sasuke because he wouldn't have changed anyway and is still an asshole who can't see beyond his own needs, or maybe I should hurt Naruto because he is a moron who can't remove himself from Sasuke and say no to something that is clearly hurting him, perhaps more than it is helping him. I'm getting so incredibly frustrated at Naruto because he can't say no, but as the story progresses I just.. pity him. IDIOTS, THE WHOLE LOT OF THEM, I SWEAR!!!!
I love Kaiba, Shikamaru, Ino and Chouji, though. :)
Really well-written with only a few mistakes. I'm really looking forward to the nex chapter!
Christ, I don't know who I want to hurt the most! As usual the choice is between Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura. Maybe Sakura because she started this mayhem and can't understand that Sasuke will never love her, but it could also be Sasuke because he wouldn't have changed anyway and is still an asshole who can't see beyond his own needs, or maybe I should hurt Naruto because he is a moron who can't remove himself from Sasuke and say no to something that is clearly hurting him, perhaps more than it is helping him. I'm getting so incredibly frustrated at Naruto because he can't say no, but as the story progresses I just.. pity him. IDIOTS, THE WHOLE LOT OF THEM, I SWEAR!!!!
I love Kaiba, Shikamaru, Ino and Chouji, though. :)
Really well-written with only a few mistakes. I'm really looking forward to the nex chapter!
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to tell you what my very favorite line was....ready???
"I'm gonna kick your shampoo commercial ass"....
and then he proceeded to pound it not only once but all night long.......yeah that's our Narubaby for you....he has them clan boys shedding their panties for him and screaming like little girls.....YEAH!!!
Can't wait to see what the Ice Princess does....poor baby I really do feel very badly for him....Ugh I see lots of Angst and Drama in the next few chapters
"I'm gonna kick your shampoo commercial ass"....
and then he proceeded to pound it not only once but all night long.......yeah that's our Narubaby for you....he has them clan boys shedding their panties for him and screaming like little girls.....YEAH!!!
Can't wait to see what the Ice Princess does....poor baby I really do feel very badly for him....Ugh I see lots of Angst and Drama in the next few chapters
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Noooooo you cruel cruel mistress! How could you leave us hanging like that?! EPIC SCENE NEXT CHAPTER! I really love Naruto and Neji, but I love Sasuke too. Ohh god, the tension!
Amazing story! Please please update soon ^^
Amazing story! Please please update soon ^^
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AH! Showdown of the century! Can't wait!