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by KageKitsuneXXX

person Dorkchic
schedule July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The reception was so funny I nearly wet myself! Was it Hinata who switched the song, or were there other people involved? The banter between everyone was priceless- up until this chapter my favorite line was Ino explaining to Naruto how he was her religion now and how she would welcome his regime. I might have to re-evaluate that now. I am so excited that you updated! I am also very pleased that Fugaku got the chance (however late it came) to act like a parent and that Neji got to speak to his uncle like he was family. I am also glad that Naruto and Sasuke's relationship is starting to settle and be more comfortable and comforting.

Looking foward to the next chapter as always. ;D
schedule July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Who could say no to an offer like that?
person nivell
schedule July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love the exchange between Sasuke and Neji...hope springs eternal indeed! And awww, Lee!
person qwerty
schedule July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved the wedding! So happy that there is going to be another chapter! Love this story so much - great writing!
schedule July 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LMAO OHMYGOD I OFFICIALLY DIED LAUGHING AT THE DANCE SEEN IN THE WEEDING! Especially when Choji told Ino not to shake too much hahahaha oh mannnnn I'm still trying to breathe *wheeze*...And I can totally ,without a doubt see Naruto vouging out on the dance floor! Also because of this 'Safety Dance', which I have never heard prior to this, has become one of my favorite songs. XD
person Gotrinba
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Read it all in the course of 3 days, and now I am sad it is all over! Do look forward to the epilogues : ) I really enjoyed the angst filled scenes in your fic. I loved how Sasuke never admitted his love to Naruto until the last few chapters. that is just like sasuke! And the subtle crying when Sasuke went all "big" and took off when he thought Naruto was going to reject him after he told his sad story of when he pulled his hair. Adorable. Anyways this story is definitely going up as a favorite of mine.
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how bizarre that was... I sat down and decided to watch Joan of Arc tonight, popped on to see what had been updated while I was waiting for the movie to get good, and see that the glorious goodness that is Torrid has been updated.. and you know how we all crave the updates like crack fiends, thus I was reading and 'watching' (because really you hold my whole attention =p) and I was vaguely hearing "France" thrown around in the background, as I am reading a chapter set in France... and then Sasuke makes a Joan Of Arc reference. I havent watched this movie in over 10 years! Little bit weirded out right now... 0.0
On another note (and this may well be the longest review I've ever written) I feel as though I'm not sure what I will do with myself once this story is finished. As an author I'd have to say that I would be proud to have written something that draws people in so much. Kudos to you. =] As close as it draws me to the end of my existence, =p cant wait for the next installment!
schedule April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Yes yes yes yes! *cheers* For some reason, I got the urge to see if there was an update, and lo and behold, there was! And what an update! *hugs her laptop and sighs* There's just nothing better than Naruto and Sasuke working things out and being together. They're my fav pairing *grins and wiggles her eyebrows lecherously* Keep up the wonderful work!
person Anon
schedule April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story for a while now on ff.net and I have to tell you it's one of my favorites in the the Naruto AU genre. It's realistic, sexy, very well written and with an amazing plot. I remeber falling in love with it right from te first chapter. I want to see how it ends, but I'm kind of sad at the same time, I'll miss it.
Anyway, amazing update! I loved the scene when they make love, it was such a great contrast to the usual impulsive way they did it before.
Can't wait to see more!
person loveusender
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Darling, you gave me a near heart attack when I saw this chapter, because I was like omg! kamikaze updated! whoo! That was the sweetest fucknig confession straight from the heart I've ever read. I almost cried. I am soo happy my two favorite boys/men are back together! Such a fantastic ending to a whirlwind story!