rate_review Reviews

I absolutely adore this story!
So beautiful and angst-y, and you keep to the characters perfectly!
The plot makes very nice connection and your writing style draws the reader in, you certainly have a talent for dragging emotions out of us, and making the butterfly in our stomach do the 'Macarina'!!!! But serious, this has developed into a brilliant story with a nice contrast between Kishi's world and your own!!
I patiently await more!!!
<3

I love this story...I mean I sat down and read all 11 chapters in one sitting. (Kinda sad I know)
The point is after I finsihed the last chapter I was craving for more. I felt just like Naruto did when broke it off with Sasuke LMAO. I was just dying.
I can't wait for the next update. *SQUA*

ZOMG Torrid is FTW and so is Kiba in this!! XD
this is like...seriously the 2nd story i've ever loved this much!!
It's so emotional, like....in the last chapter when Naruto and Sasuke got into it was like "BE STRONG NARUTO-KUN" but then he gave in and i was like 'wtf is wrong with you' *sigh* this is great!
i find myself staying up until 4am reading this. XDDD it's that good.
there are no such things as breaks when reading this story. it's like...you have to read ALL the way through. lolz. Can't wait for your update!!! :P

I felt myself sniffling at the end of the chapter.
You had some really amazing and awesome parts in this chapter.
It's good that Naruto has people like Kiba in his life.

"Damn you, Sinead O'Connor. Damn you to hell…" gasps in recognition...then whispers "I say that every morning too..." O.o

this took me so long to read because I couldn't stop laughing!!!
this was beautiful and manic and sad and so damn funny.

your eloquence for Shikamaru on love and loss...
(well didn't that just make us all think of someone from our past...with a wistful smile - runs off to light a candle at your shrine)

I luuuuuv youuuuu:)
thanks for this! (ps - really, where do we send the PC donations?)

REading this reminds me why I don't do relationships anymore. Egad.

AH! I prefer the crazy, energetic Naruto over the sad, morose Naruto. Sasuke needs to get his shit together and stop toying with Naruto's heart - either you want him or you don't. Argh.
Anyway, great chapter. I love this story!

Goddamn Uchiha!!!! He just doesn't care who he hurts or what damages ensue as long as he gets what he wants. What an ass.


Keep up the great work! As always, your updates for this story are fantastic!!

After all his hard work, Kiba is back to square one with Naruto. Poor Kiba. However, I'm happy that Kiba kept Sasuke away, he needs to suffer a lot more than Naruto does. Thanks for another great chapter.

"You hungry?" "Not really." "Fuck yes, you're hungry...." That was a beautiful exchange right there. couldn't continue on with the rest of the story for about 3 minutes I was laughing so hard.

also, as a side...i must have used step 2 to over power step 1 because i didn't have much of a stay in bed and life is crap moment..... now i want to know if there are more steps i missed.

great story... even though i feel like i should be slightly depressed and pissed about naruto's situation your cometic timing makes everything really easy to take and helps keep my interest.

Happy writing!!!