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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your endings are always so good.
I can no longer tell who I want to win. Sasuke is being so selfish but I can't honestly say I don't want it to work out but Neji is a great second choice. I cannot wait to keep reading so I hope your computer holds out for, if nothing else, my sanity's sake because I don't think I could stand it if you ever discontinued the story. Keep up the great work!
I can no longer tell who I want to win. Sasuke is being so selfish but I can't honestly say I don't want it to work out but Neji is a great second choice. I cannot wait to keep reading so I hope your computer holds out for, if nothing else, my sanity's sake because I don't think I could stand it if you ever discontinued the story. Keep up the great work!
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
girl, let us know were to send the donations for your new pc!
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March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally opt for NarutoxNeji, but Naruto is just so broken from Sasuke it makes me want to cry.
From the moment Neji showed up, I found myself cheering for him. He is trying so hard.
I know it will be SasuNaru in the end, but I think Neji is just want Naruto needs right now.
From the moment Neji showed up, I found myself cheering for him. He is trying so hard.
I know it will be SasuNaru in the end, but I think Neji is just want Naruto needs right now.
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March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*does a little voodoo dance for the health of your computer*
Best story I've read in a while. I can't wait for updates. ^^
I would like to see Naruto become involved with Neji before circling back to Sasuke. He needs a taste of his own medicine anyway. (Just don't let poor Neji get too heartbroken!)
Best story I've read in a while. I can't wait for updates. ^^
I would like to see Naruto become involved with Neji before circling back to Sasuke. He needs a taste of his own medicine anyway. (Just don't let poor Neji get too heartbroken!)
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March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aaah! So I wrote this big long review and then my internet died for a second. So I will try to reiterate the whole thing XD.
Not a whole lot of things make me cry, but the end of this chapter did. Gaaah!! I'm so mad at Sasuke for not telling Naruto that he loves him and needs him just as much!!! Poor Naruto, I could feel his heart breaking as I read!! But I can also understand Sasuke's dilemma too. The way you write I can just feel the battle going on in him. Even though he purposely tries to get Naruto's goat, he loves Naruto (even if he wont say it xP) and cant live without him. But he's also trying to fit pieces from two different puzzles into one. He's trying to please his family and Sakura and Naruto when all of them have different interests for him. No wonder he is so messed up!! You really cant blame him. One of them should have told Sakura forever ago, but then I guess there would be no plot then xD. And Sakura, I just cant bring myself to feel sorry for her. The dumb bitch caused all this and if only Sasuke knew he'd be singing a different tune!! Hopefully she sees all those lovely Naru-marks all over his lovely body. THAT'LL SHOW YA YOU DUMB BITCH!!! Hehe sorry, got carried away. I just love how you have modelled all the characters to fit your own style but they remain true to their personalities. Its a beautiful thing you do. As always this chapter was perfect grammatically and flowed like a smooth stream. I cant wait for the next chapter. The great thing about you is that you make me even more excited with each chapter that goes by. If I thought I was waiting with baited breath for this one, the next one might just strangle me =D
~Cianis
Not a whole lot of things make me cry, but the end of this chapter did. Gaaah!! I'm so mad at Sasuke for not telling Naruto that he loves him and needs him just as much!!! Poor Naruto, I could feel his heart breaking as I read!! But I can also understand Sasuke's dilemma too. The way you write I can just feel the battle going on in him. Even though he purposely tries to get Naruto's goat, he loves Naruto (even if he wont say it xP) and cant live without him. But he's also trying to fit pieces from two different puzzles into one. He's trying to please his family and Sakura and Naruto when all of them have different interests for him. No wonder he is so messed up!! You really cant blame him. One of them should have told Sakura forever ago, but then I guess there would be no plot then xD. And Sakura, I just cant bring myself to feel sorry for her. The dumb bitch caused all this and if only Sasuke knew he'd be singing a different tune!! Hopefully she sees all those lovely Naru-marks all over his lovely body. THAT'LL SHOW YA YOU DUMB BITCH!!! Hehe sorry, got carried away. I just love how you have modelled all the characters to fit your own style but they remain true to their personalities. Its a beautiful thing you do. As always this chapter was perfect grammatically and flowed like a smooth stream. I cant wait for the next chapter. The great thing about you is that you make me even more excited with each chapter that goes by. If I thought I was waiting with baited breath for this one, the next one might just strangle me =D
~Cianis
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March 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT!!! I love your story. :) Keep it up! Please update soon and often!
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As of this chapter, I am officially putting this story onto my recommended story list under my profile. This last chapter was so incredibly amazing that it deserves a place among the stories that I will go back to read from time to time long after they've come to completion.
Keep up the great work. I look forward to seeing Naruto regain his sense of self and consequently, Sasuke fall apart with out him. Also, go Neji, for being there.
Keep up the great work. I look forward to seeing Naruto regain his sense of self and consequently, Sasuke fall apart with out him. Also, go Neji, for being there.
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March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bad Romance indeed. That was the song that was going through my head the moment Sasuke suggested that Naruto sleep with Sakura so that they could get off his back.
As much as I feel bad about Sasuke needing to marry for the sake of duty, and Sakura being madly in love with Sasuke... I say FFFFF them both. Naruto's love is so pure and blinding that... you've broken my heart. Even though I don't really like Neji with Naruto... I kinda wish they have at least a little time together so that the bastard, aka Sasuke, at least gets some idea as to what Naruto's going through. Hell, if I wasn't so into NaruSasu, I'd say let Sasuke and Sakura burn for their sham of a marriage but I want Naruto and Sasuke together ;_;. You have them so IC that I could picture this if the manga was shoujo, with Sasuke being the self centered a-hole, Sakura the blindly in love and Naruto, the one who wants everyone's happiness at the cost of his own.
Gah, I can't say how much I enjoy, hate, and love this story all at once. Keep up the good work and I hope you make Sasuke pay somewhat for what Naruto's gone through for his ass. :D
As much as I feel bad about Sasuke needing to marry for the sake of duty, and Sakura being madly in love with Sasuke... I say FFFFF them both. Naruto's love is so pure and blinding that... you've broken my heart. Even though I don't really like Neji with Naruto... I kinda wish they have at least a little time together so that the bastard, aka Sasuke, at least gets some idea as to what Naruto's going through. Hell, if I wasn't so into NaruSasu, I'd say let Sasuke and Sakura burn for their sham of a marriage but I want Naruto and Sasuke together ;_;. You have them so IC that I could picture this if the manga was shoujo, with Sasuke being the self centered a-hole, Sakura the blindly in love and Naruto, the one who wants everyone's happiness at the cost of his own.
Gah, I can't say how much I enjoy, hate, and love this story all at once. Keep up the good work and I hope you make Sasuke pay somewhat for what Naruto's gone through for his ass. :D
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March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Was so happy that Naruto walked away and Neji walked through his door. Thanks for the wonderful story.
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March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you have no idea how addicted i am to your story. Normally i dont even bother to review but i'll make an exception in this case (especially since i check to see if your story is updated pratically everyday)
so please up-date soon !!! your story is completely awesome and i cant wait to see how sasuke will react once he finds out about neji.
so please up-date soon !!! your story is completely awesome and i cant wait to see how sasuke will react once he finds out about neji.