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by KageKitsuneXXX

person SamuraiSaaya
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Perfect, absolutely perfect. Their breakup was so intense. I'm feeling so many emotions right now, I almost feel as if I'm in Naruto's head. Amazing chapter.

Please, please update soon.
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nonononoonnoooo!!!
Poor naruto x_x
Sasuke and Naruto should be togetherr! Arghh! I hope Sasuke finds out about what Sakura did, and then ditchers her so him and naruto could be together..haha..
Anyways, I absolutely love this story, you're really an amazing author @_@
person midnight essence
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn lady gaga! I <3 tht song, but gawd! I wish there was more after chp 10. I love this story! I am so sorry about your compy; I went through tht myself at one point. But if she/he is good to you hurry and feed me more of this awesomeness. Its like a drug ya know?
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't think that Sasuke expected it to end like that at all. For someone that always has a retort, he was pretty dumbstruck. Even the bed? was he really stooping that low to make naruto feel worse? That's not right man, not right.
Now that it's over, is Sasuke going to continue living within the pretense of a loveless marriage? Where will Neji fit in? And can Naruto repair his broken heart enough to move..on.

The part at the end really hit me hard *sniff* i wanted to cuddle up my dobe in my arms and tell him that everything was going to be alright, that Sasuke-teme doesn't deserve him. I just wanted to wipe his tears.
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh dude, my heart freaking sputtered for a second when Sakura said that. I'm pretty sure Naruto is having his first ever heart attack at those words. She probably doesn't mean to say it the way she is saying it but still... man oh man, that's not good at all and by God Naruto buy yourself a clue. I'm starting to get pissed at all three of them now and can only Neji right now because he's the only one who makes sense. Him and Ino are now the only ones I'm liking right now because Sakura is beyond delusional and Sasuke is an emotionaless bastard that can only feel with his dick seventy-five percent of the time to realize that he's not only hurting his wife Sakura who he is supposed to be married to but his bestie Naruto. I know run-on sentence but meh, this story always gets me flustered but in a good way of course. Naruto... sweetie, you idiot.. Neji could so be the one because he's not attached and he's hot and he won't treat you like a doormat twenty-four seven so pick him for everyones good @_@ I don't care if Sasuke has a change of heart and realizes in his Grinch-like heart that he actually loves Naruto beyond friendship. I could give a flying fuck because he doesn't deserve Naruto and as manipulative as Sakura was she doesn't deserve Sasuke either. Meh but kudos on flashback moment though XP
person KC
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do not remember if I have left you a review on this story yet or not. So if I am repeating something I wrote perviously sorry.

I hope that you hook up Neji and Naruto as a couple. I think it would be wonderful for Sakura and Sasuke to get their "just desserts" for all of their lying and manipulating. ALSO for Gods sake have Naruto change the locks on the appartment, so Sasuke can not just show up there. Or have him move to a new place.

Looking forward to new chapters...
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story makes my heart hurt so much, especially since I love, love, love Naruto and the one you portrayed is so made of love. The background story of how Naruto and Sasuke met, and why Naruto can't just drop Sasuke for being a douche, is so romantic. Every chapter you've posted so far has left me pining for Naruto's sake.

Thanks for sharing and can't wait for the next chapter.
person Jelp
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:( Stupid Sasuke, hurting Naruto like that. But it's also very sad that Sasuke is do everything he thinks possible to keep Naruto close. He's being as manipulative as he can in order to keep Naruto when it's clear Naruto is trying to break away. I hope Naruto can stay strong. If Sasuke keeps manipulating him, then Sasuke will just keep twisting things so he gets everything he wants, and nothing to what would be best for everyone, even if it's hard.

I really, really hope Sasuke gets jealous of Naruto and Neji. I know he's hurting, but he's also hurting both Sakura and Naruto too. Looking forward to the next chapter! ~ Jelp
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Naruto and Neji. Sasuke is a grade-A prick.
person roro237
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WoW wOw Wow wOW! That was intense! I was pissed at Mrs.Uchiha for getting in Naruto face! Then outraged at Sasuke for being all lovey dovey with her in front of Naruto! Ready to knock some heads when Naruto screwed in their bed falling right into Sasuke trap! Sad so sad for the heart broken man! Been there and can still remember the pain:) Well well well Neji showing up?! I loved every word!! You have me hook line and sinker!!!