rate_review Reviews

This chapter was beautiful. Everything about it was perfect. Sasuke is such a prick and everything about the nature of the relationship he forced upon Naruto makes me want to scream for Naruto to go to Neji, but after a chapter like this I can see why Naruto would find it hard to leave.


Keep up the great work.

YAY for new Chappie!!! Sigh I'm torn on who I think Naruto would be happy with!! I mean I like how sasuke is with naruto and I like how neji is with naruto.......now if only there was some way that sasuke could denounce his dretched marriage to sakura, ugh. Keep up the good work!!! Thanks for the update!!

That was so beautiful! There's definitely something deeper there. neji is good but the binding strength of Naruto and sasuke's relationship goes BEYOND words. Having that as a child makes it even stronger. Sakura is going downhill with that plan. Never going to work *shakes head*
The cello playing was wonderful! and sasuke smiled! man, i felt like something lit up in my heart also *feels fluffy inside* I'm a sucker for sasuke *hangs head in shame..*
You can definitely get a break hun, a week is good, but don't keep us waiting forever! we will track you down!!

sakura has got no chance at all, I hope so!! sasu you need to decide, because naru is madely in love with you but neji will interfere!!
I am crving for more !! see you next week

Oh wow. For the first time in a long time, I couldn't stop reading. I've seen this story here and on Y! Gallery but never thought to click on it. I regret it now. It's beautiful, yet subtly dark and complicated, just how I love them. And different too. And while I'm no fan of Neji, especially not Neji and Naruto, the scenes with them worked well for this story. They all stay mostly in character too, hard for an AU, except Sakura who is definitely far more devious than in the manga. But I love that too unlike when it happens in other stories, it's just the right amount and so carefully put together. It adds great intrigue. I'll be watching on Y! Gallery for a new update. Please don't wait too long!

Loved it, just like I loved the past chapters. Will wait patiencly for the next update

KK you are a goddess.

That was so awesome!! The way Naruto describled his love for Sasuke and being a ghost was so breath taking to me:) Then Sasuke keeping the laptop and wanting to be Naruto muse was so romantic:) I hope Mrs.Uchiha will see that all the tricks in the world can't change someones heart. WoW! I totally loved that chapter!! The hard work you put into it came shining threw! Hey no running away after giving us a punch in the stomach talking about taking a week off:)

i don't know who asked how long this would be but honestly this is one of my favorite fics of all time. its really got the depth of character development and thought that is lacking from so many one-shots.

i hope you write until you havent got a single idea left of how to take this story forward :)

Hmmm. Sasuke's now showing some interesting sides that are not totally selfish... could it be love?