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by KageKitsuneXXX

schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It was beautiful as always. I think I would die without andother chapter but I suppose it would be all the sweeter reading it the following week. Sasuke playing cello for Naruto is the cutest thing I have ever read!! I can just imagine the scene. I cant wait for the end just so I can see how the story comes together!! I really hope that they can be happy and Sakura realizes Sasuke will never love her like he loves Naruto. And I hope Neji gives it up lmao. Sasuke is soooo better XD
~Cianis, waiting with baited breath
person Daisy
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow... i just started reading this today and i have to say it's a fabulous story.. Can't wait for more. I feel so sorry for Naruto. All that scheming on everyone elses part and he seems to be getting the short end of the stick. i know he should say no to Sasuke but i have been in somewhat the same situation and it is never easy to walk away. I can't wait for more. Please update soon!
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am not getting tired of this story. I check back everyday for an update crossing my fingers that this will be nejinaru for at least 2 chapters. No one writes that pairing anymore. Keep up the good work I love it.
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"So let me get this straight. You want to put Naruto and Sasuke in a controlled environment like a couple of your lab mice, watch them interact and make a series of observations that should lead you to make informed deductions, after which you'll be able to make a fitting conclusion, thus salvaging some semblance of a marriage?"

GO INO!!!

double the usual writing...well then thank you, thank you!
and if you take next week off the GREAT ORANGE DICTATOR will come after you!!!

(it's nice that I haven't fit all the puzzle pieces together yet and you have surprises in each chapter, lovely - thanks:D)
person lividangel
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
uggg!
I can't get use to this typing your name bother!
that was me above (anon)

well I will add that I am very curious about Neji and his roll in this
so write as much as you want, let the chapters flow, and I love the fact that you
allude to the fact that you stories end just were they are suppose, to no more - no less.

that my friend is a writer in every sense of the word:)
person inuspike
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're making my moods just swing all over the place with this one. First, I'm laughing at Neji and his wondrous experience on the farm. Then, forlorn at Naruto's tale of non-existence and subsequent acceptance from Sasuke. Moving right along to pissed at Sakura for thinking that she could even fathom the boys' 'unique' relationship via scientific observation, then take these observations and apply them to her own relationship with Sasuke. All the way up to (and I really have no other word for this) "Awwww" when Sasuke decides to act as Naruto's muse (love the way you didn't have that lead into something physical, but equally as intimate). And backed to pissed when Sakura thinks she could EVER have that kind of closeness when she's a scheming trollop. Grrr...

Excellent chapter though! I thoroughly enjoyed my little mood roller-coaster. ^^
person SexyRyu28
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*daydreams of strangling Sakura with a Cello string*

Oh hai ^o^
I'm torn between Sasuke and Neji *sigh* So much love and so much sad stuff and always that woman in the middle of it all just makes me so angry. See, a good story makes me feel a whole bunch of things ans this is a good story. Nice update for before bed reading.

Ryu
person SexyRyu28
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First time reviewing any of your stories (tho' I've read most of them)
I'm a sucker for love triangles, I was already too wrapped in the story when you added the Hyuuga element.
Neji's last words just hit home and I anxiously wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for sharing and awesome work.

~SexyRyu28
person lryne
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i definitely agrre to Neji!

its not just i like neji-naruto pairing, but i am an avid fan of naruto-sasuke pairing always, i just like it when Neji is way better than Sasuke in some sense. and i like it when Neji becomes the 3rd party, Naruto deserves someone who deserves. Sasuke is afraid to lose their reputation so it only means he doesnt love Naruto to the extent that what other people say to him matter more than anything else.

unlike Neji that his uncle doesnt care if his a gay as long as he's doing his job....

hmmm..it would be an interesting chapter where somehow neji and naruto will attend some charity party and then they will meet sasuke and sakura their, i really love seeing sasuke so very jealous specially if neji will make a move on naruto publicly! and he can't do anything about it for it will ruined his image..hahah XD

i wonder what will he felt when he knows that his rival also got interested in the one he love, will he fight for his 'love' or something like that or not?

please update soon
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm sorry, neji. but all i have to say to you is, fuck that shit. no one is better for naruto than sasuke.

lol.

i like this story. i am so not looking forward to the angst and drama that may happen before we reach the end of this ride, but it doesn't detract from the story's goodness. i look forward to the next update!