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WOW I ... wow its awesome... there really is no other word for it you are doing a great job. I especially liked Neji's speech Rarely do I like how he is written but you balance him very well cant wait to see were this goes. I know this is sasunaru/narusasu but I cant help and root for Neji ^.^

Neji is so awesome in this. I'm now undecided as to who I want naruto to end up with. Sasuke is such a moron but I already knew that beforehand. I've always had this love-hate relationship with the broody jerk. Argh. Anyway I think this is developing well. It started a little slow for me but the latest chapters have been fantastic. I'll be on the lookout for more updates.

I'm starting to feel like I'm the only person actually rooting for Sasuke. :(

I think it's kind of rude of Neji to constantly question Naruto about his personal choices, even if he does believe himself to be better. I'd be pretty ticked off myself if some semi-stranger just sort of floated into my life and started criticizing all of my choices, whether or not they were good or bad ones. In my opinion, Neji is most definitely the asshole in this story. But I'm pretty sure I'm beginning to be the only one who thinks that.

In the case of Sasuke, I think you have to give the guy credit for the fact that he is doing what he can. He is trying to save face for his family by marrying a girl he doesn't like and yet he is still devoted to Naruto. It would be one thing if he had constant sex with Sakura, but even from her thoughts we see that he still only has eyes for Naruto and has only had sex with her to consummate the marriage. Sasuke is in a rock and a hard place. He has obligation to his family and job and to his lover and he has to sort those things out properly before he can move forward. And yes, while this is difficult on Naruto too, you can see that Naruto does get pleasure and happiness out of being with Sasuke. He obviously cares about him, just as Sasuke obviously cares about him. The romance is strong even if it is hidden.

I just hope that Sakura's deception can be revealed so all will be settled and Neji can move on to someone whom he hasn't meet only a few times and isn't already in love.

Keep up the great work; I'm looking forward to seeing how this will play out! ☺

So, there's a small (miniscule) little light flickering in Sasuke's head at last?? He's offended because Naruto calls him boring - dear lord, there must be better choice words to describe him than "boring"!!! But nevertheless the apology from Naruto triggered something. I'm rooting for Neji but am resigned that it's not gonna happen - poor guy. There's bound to be fallout of major proportions eventually, and I'm loving the tantalising way that you are getting there splattered with a good dose of fun (Crunch - owieeeee!). Good work!

Oh my God I LOVED Neji's speech at the end of the chapter. It managed to be confident, sweet, observant, and sympathetic all at once- very impressive. I cannot wait to see how it affects Naruto.

Yes!!! Amazing story.

I don't want Neji to win in the end but lets show mother fuck'r Sasuke what jealousy is!!!

God damn I want Naruto to hurt Sasuke SO bad instead of being his 'indoor bathroom'!!! Aieeeee must read moar!

Go Narutoooooooooo! BWAIE -faint-

ahem so like yeah, jesus best story I've read in a LONG time.

Yes I hope this means more nejinaru in the future.

i love neji !!! he really know what he want; sasu must realise what it's important befor it' s too late. I love your story!!!more more !!!!!

As always I have nothing but wonderful things to say. So [insert as many positive remarks here as you see fit]. Can't wait till the next chapter
~Cianis

Loved Neji's talk with Naruto at the end. Naruto needs more than what Sasuke is willing to give and it would be great to see Neji be the one to show Naruto.