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Too lazy to sign in but had to review while I was still fueled up. Yes Neji you are better. For some odd reason I had the freaking picture in my head of 'The Six Million Dollar Man' you know the whole mess about we have the techonology to build him stronger, faster. It was like Neji was going all bionical by saying he was smarter, and had the great eyes and crap but it doesn't matter because Neji's the one ><

Naruto should pick him because he's unattached and was ready to molest him in a children's section of the library.

So didn't feel sorry that Naruto's feelings were hurt. I was freaking doing the worm in my head when he gave the kicked puppy dog look. It'd take more than that for me to forgive him. Naruto and Neji for life. The tribe has spoken and I am done @_@

Oh... loved the lisp... we must bring that back because it looked really cute on Neji... even stalking Neji was cute ><

I totally agree with Neji!!! Sasuke is an asshole to the fullest!!!!

Naruto needs to open those pretty blue eyes of his and see that AssHole(Sasuke) is using him...
Like Neji stated, there is history there, but what the hell man!!! You are basically the lover to your best friend who happens to be married to your other best friend...

Come on Naruto...dude!!! That doesn't seem right!!!!

One other thing...CHANGE THE DAMN LOCKS TO YOUR APARTMENT!!! Than the bastard can't get in whenever he wants...!

*taking a deep breath**

Great fic!!! Post soon!!!

Oh I hope your keeping Neji as a hiccup!
and it took me five minutes to stop laughing over your resturant choice:D

Sasuke who I think truly believes he's doing right by the two of them
Naruto who is so hung up on Sasuke that he can't think straight
and a vulnerable Neji - wonderful:)

the talking between Naruto and Neji in the woods was...oh heavens it was so charged, so sexy!

thank you oh Goddess of Naruto land!

Ahh! I LOVE:
"As far as he could work out from the first few paragraphs, he was promising them his firstborn providing that they spun all his straw into gold. Sounded like a fair trade to him. Deciding that whatever it was wasn’t worth the impending aneurysm, Naruto started signing."

I've raved about your work in many reviews. One thing I loved about Role Play was sasuke not being evil: just rude, clueless, and in pain. Your portrayal of these too boys, throughout thier lives, reaching out and pulling back until they finally understand, was nothing short of brilliant. I find myself hoping torrid!sasuke has a reason to be they way he is, and a capacity to grow...because I hate to see naruto hurt (unless there is a spectacular reward at the end, hee hee).

since I'm supposed to critique (damn that, how can I critique a genius?) I'll say this: I'm weird, but I like writing to be writing and manga, manga. So my least favorite of your writing (though I still love them) are those that tread across that boundary. You are not a big violator of this, you hardly even use "sweatdrops". But when writers say: "sakura punched naruto, and a throbbing bump the size of his head burst up", my mental images of the characters are ruined. Thank you for not going there. BUT! Don't be you DARE let my comments be in your mind when you write humor-- I don't want anything to disturb your genius for comic timing!
adore you...

O. M. G.

"He wasn’t even sure where an ‘onus’ should be located."

if laughter cures all ills I will soon be a very well woman. That's why (ahem) it's quite imperative that you continue to write naruto. Forever. Unceasingly.

neji can't just let naru go away !! i love your story, see you soon!!

I wouldn't want ot be Naruto right now. No way. He has such a hard choice to make. I would really welcome him getting involved with neji but unless he does something about it, Sasuke will always be an anchor trapped on his leg to drag him to the pit of sorrow. He can't keep going on like this. IT WILL TEAR HIM APART!..BTW: Neji is so cute ^_^

Ah! woo-hoo! An update already! Keep it up, and thanks for the best story I've read in a long time. ^^

Love your wit - from the details of the contract (what was that!!!) and all through the "date"! That's more like Naruto, it was good to see him laugh, even if was at the expense of Neji. Until Sasuke turned up. How about Naruto change his locks?? Naruto belongs to Sasuke, eh? Grrrrrrrrrr......... Sasuke, grow some balls and do the right thing!

I'd be a fool not to review this when I saw that you had a new chapter. I squee'd in my head when I saw it and when I remembered that this was the chapter that Hyuga entered I was doing freaking backflips... in my head.

My gosh I loved every moment between Naruto and Neji and I freaking laughed until I cried when Neji ate the chilly of life. At first I was omigosh this will end up like one of those teen slasher movies when I found they were meeting out in the woods then it progressed to my cheeks hurting from smiling so hard. My god just picturing the proud and sophisticated Neji just suddenly smiling confidently, freezing up as his face changes color and just keeling over was freaking brilliant. That was one of the best filler episodes ever and I'm glad someone actually touched on it. Meh... still think TenTen was trying to kill Neji by feeding him that curry.

Awww and the moment when Naruto said that Neji was his type got me all warm and fuzzy inside. I was really hoping that Neji could be the one that could drag Naruto from thinking about that damn Uchiha bastard. I swear if there is still someone out there that thinks that Sasuke still deserves Naruto after this moment they need to be flogged. Yes I used a new torture word... flogged. But meh, loved it... as always and I'm ranting again. Sorry...CONTINUE!!!!

And damn it I swear Sasuke is like crack >< But if Whitney can recover from it then so can Naruto. Crack is whack Naruto... REMEMBER THAT ><

End rant/fan obsessy thingie v.v