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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
GAAAH! I can't believe I missed something you wrote!
WELCOME BACK COOKIE !!!!!
I've read it all so far in one sitting but I will review each one...
(I haven't been to this site much the last couple of months, see what happens when one slacks!)
as one of your many deciples, must say brilliant start.
angst and heartache, can't go wrong with those:)
WELCOME BACK COOKIE !!!!!
I've read it all so far in one sitting but I will review each one...
(I haven't been to this site much the last couple of months, see what happens when one slacks!)
as one of your many deciples, must say brilliant start.
angst and heartache, can't go wrong with those:)
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chpt 2
love the serendipitous beginning of there physical relationship.
love the serendipitous beginning of there physical relationship.
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chpt 3 (I was the anon abov, oops o.0)
first I was like "OH...he's going to do it for God and Country!!!"
but then phantom Naruto came to the bedroom.
no other way that;P
you like Paris don't you:)
first I was like "OH...he's going to do it for God and Country!!!"
but then phantom Naruto came to the bedroom.
no other way that;P
you like Paris don't you:)
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chpt 4
“So I’m basically a comfortable convenience; kind of like an indoor bathroom?”
ouch...
you have this flowing so beautifully.
and Sakura...
I love that you gave her the...gumption, shall we say...to get what she wants;)
but your Sakra's are always strong.
love this.
“So I’m basically a comfortable convenience; kind of like an indoor bathroom?”
ouch...
you have this flowing so beautifully.
and Sakura...
I love that you gave her the...gumption, shall we say...to get what she wants;)
but your Sakra's are always strong.
love this.
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chpt 5
"Now, he’s a gigantic asshole, who’s also kind of a dick.
And I don’t care if those are your two favourite body parts; it’s a bad thing!”
heheheheheee...I love youuuuu!
brilliant that you had him first thought his wedding ring was a malady to his hand!
and the prospect of Neji, yum. what a lovely monkey wrench I believe is coming:)
"Now, he’s a gigantic asshole, who’s also kind of a dick.
And I don’t care if those are your two favourite body parts; it’s a bad thing!”
heheheheheee...I love youuuuu!
brilliant that you had him first thought his wedding ring was a malady to his hand!
and the prospect of Neji, yum. what a lovely monkey wrench I believe is coming:)
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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I hope neji gets thrown in and wants to take naruto away from stoopid sasuke!!!! Ahhh I can't wait for another chapter! Keep up the good work!!
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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well said Kiba - pity it didn't work! Now then, is Naruto going to hook up with Neji, or does Neji know the truth about the Sakura deal and accidently spill the beans to Naruto? Either, can't wait to see where you go with this. It's going to be messy!
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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oohho neji is entreing the game, becarful sasu you may lose naru. I am crazy in love with your story , see you soon
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me this is a segue to a hot smexy fling between Naruto and Neji. I could use that.
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! Update!!! I am so happy!! I understand the viewpoint that Kiba is coming from. It's like a virus attacking your respiratory system. But naruto can't just SHRUG off Sasuke! he's his best friend and the one person that he relies on. Sasuke may be a cold bastard but he still needs at least one good friend in the world. He just needs to stop abusing people to satisfy his wants. Take Naruto and go damn it!!