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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah were headed towards nejinaru my fav pairing. I will def be coming back to read this. good job
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is some wild ride. Loving all the twists and turns!
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January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First of all let me say Sakura is an ASS!!! how could she do that to her father and to herself I mean is she really that STUPID!!!!!!! to realize Sasuke will NEVER love her. And that DAMN Sasuke I mean yeah he kinda got force into this marriage but he should have said something so he is STUPID too and do you know why bceause he is a SELFISH BASTARD!!!!! he just wants to have cake and eat it too. Poor Naruto:[ (even though he is wrong for sleeping with Sasuke)but DAMN Sasuke is just using him. Please I request that Naruto gets another love interest that will put Sasuke (THE BASTARD!!) to SHAME! and makes him realize it is not all about him. And that I hope that DAMN Sakura gets whats coming to her!!!! And I still feel like ranting :} Anyways this is a really good story got me going crazy like this lol! I can't wait for more chapters and the way you have written the characters is just really amazing. Keep up the good work!!! please please update soon!!! Thank you !!!
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January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! This is probably one of the greatest works of fiction I have ever read. Briliant so far! This is easily a 3000 out of 10. I cant wait to read the next chapter!!
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January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good lord...that bitch. Grrrr, I knew Sakura's father wouldn't have done something like sell her away to the Uchiha Clan. Oooh, I hope you make that come back to bite her on the ass.
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January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I love this story!
I waited for the update like some sort of obsessed fangirl...
I must be an emotion-masochist, because I seem to love to torture myself with the rollercoaster angst fics- jeeze, I know I'm gonna get all teary-eyed and emo while reading them but I love it- and Torrid is no exception. I love Naruto's emotional turmoil... but, God, it irks me the way Sasuke is getting his way (in a completely masochistically enjoyable way, that is). If Naruto isn’t gonna emotionally close off to Sasuke- and Sasuke have to fight to get Naruto back (I know, angsty, the way I like it, but also very cliché :P)… do you think you could add in Naruto at least kind of attempting to steel his emotions by getting with other people? Then I’d at least get to feel Naruto’s, Sasuke-induced emotional turmoil would be paid in full with Sasuke’s jealousy :P … and I’d really love it if Naruto told Sasuke that he could be/sleep/see/what-ev. with, anyone he wanted, because he and Sasuke aren’t in a relationship- mean of me, I know, but I like when Naruto throws Sasuke’s own words back in his face when Sasuke’s being such a princess, lol. Keep up the great work, I can’t wait for the update… seriously :)
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January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist! Forget what I said about Sakura previously, she deserves ****. Poor Naruto being broadsided by both of his "friends", I still say get out quick, but I guess he's in for the long haul. I hope that this is going to be a long story with lots more twists and plotting (please, don't get Sakura pregnant, although a scheming bunny boiler like that would probably have that high on the "to do" list), very well written and look foward to the next revelation
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January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dear god, this has a LOT of potential. The drama and the characters are AMAZING! Please keep updating!
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January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
a dirty little secret can mean big trouble !! hope sasu will discover the truth soon!!poor naru . I really enjoy reading this sotry see you soon
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for an update for this forever!..lol..man, sasuke thinks he can have his cake and eat it huh? greedy bastard. Soon he will come to realise that things will nto always work out his way..hmm..ohh a devious Sakura..haha, she has always been one to REALLY go after what she wants, can't wait to see how this develops.