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for Torrid

by KageKitsuneXXX

person SamuraiSaaya
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely captivating story. The whole plot screams angst and passion! And the smex scenes? Hot HOT! I love this story so far, please update soon ^^
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read what happens next... Are resolutions keep?
person Lila
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sweet another story from kage-sama!!!! i have read role play numerous times :) and keep coming back...So yeah this new story has the workings of frustration for sasuke and naruto as role play had. So it's gonna be awesome and hot and amazing and intense and other adjectives that imply total greatness :)
Poor Sakura good call on giving background information on how the situation became the way it did. :)
This story has started off with a bang and can't wait for the next chapter and see how sasuke handles the honey in honeymoon lol! :)
person JSinuYasha
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I feel bad for Naruto and I hope Sasuke gets what's coming to him. 7yrs and he really thought Naruto wouldn't feel anything for him, even after Naruto's warnings. =/ update ASAP!
person richon
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
a really good start, I love it, poor naru he must be broken hart !!! sasu you are a real bastard !!!see you soon!! I am craving for more !!
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke is out of his f-ing mind.

Please continue, I can't wait to see him squirm his way through sex with his wife!
person Ivy
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Liked the chance to read the background on how they got to that point. Fugaku was actually likable in this fic and it was insightful advice he gave Sasuke on his impending marriage. Can't wait to see if Naruto will maintain his no hooking up stance now that Sasuke is married. Look foward to reading more ^_^
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay I get to stalk you here and at ygal...teehee

Sasuke wins Bastard of the Year Award in this one Wow...He's a real selfish mofo....I hope Neji or Gaara step in to give Naru some comfort and give the Uchiha a litte piece of his own medicine. Let's see how the Bastard like it when his blond finds someone else to keep him happy..Poor Naru needs a good shoulder to cry on!!
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I really hope you'll do something abt Sasuke. Having a Naruto that just gives into what Sasuke wants will just irk the hello out of me! Argh! Better yet, get Naruto to hook up with Itachi or something like that.
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I've ever wanted to kill Sasuke like I want to do now. No I don't feel sorry for the Uchiha bastard because he got what he deserved but poor Naruto. OMG who the hell does that to somebody after they confess they love you. He freaking treats Naruto like a yoyo and expects him to keep crawling back after he cools off. My god and he won't recognize it as a relationship even if secret but apparently he's not willing to sleep with anyone else but him. Either Sasuke needs to grow a pair or get the hell out of dodge.

OMG but this is so good. You give my hate for Sasuke a whole new meaning. I mean that in a good way. The way you make Sasuke to a royal a-hole is freaking expiring. And I know it's ridicolous to soften my curse words when I just called him a bastard but he is one and a douche bag and everything. But awww still loved that you let us see how their relationship sort of evolved.

And why the hell is Sasuke jealous that Naruto called Sakura his best friend. I mean she's been more of a friend then him and Sasuke's just a fuck buddy... no strings attached and all that. Maybe Naruto should get in a relationship to make Sasuke jealous and realize he does care about him more than just a booty call but it's your call. Love this story... hate that guy ====> Sasuke.