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for Torrid

by KageKitsuneXXX

person Otakuchan
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O.o!! Nuuu don't tell me.. I have to wait more, like the poor Sasuke T_T The wait will kill me >.<
Anyways, amazing story. Honestly.
^_^
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ack!! Major major cliffie! Is Naruto really saying goodbye? After all this time?
person dar
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY you are back!! I am glad to read another chapter, but AHHHH cliffhanger!! I hope you update soon! And thank you for the new chapter!!
person 7troublesome
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! I liked it immensely, especially the talk Ino/Sasuke... I was totally happy about Neji's uncaging! Maybe you plan to pair him with somebody red? Thanks a lot - wonderful strory!
person Ivy
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!!!
person Mitsuko
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Argh! I may have to kill you. Not for the late update, but for the cliffie and the unkown as to how long it may be until you uuuuuuuuuuupppppppddddddatttttttttttteeeeeeeee!!!! This is the only story i actively check daily for and i feel like a crackhead waiting for the next update hahahah! Keep up the frustratingly awesome work ;D
person softwelshrain
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AAAAWWWWWW - what a cop out for Neji! After he tried so hard, a talk with his "seniors" and the carrot of de-caging veered him off course and he effectively throws in the towel. Another wonderful chapter - you take your time, my dear, quality is better than quantity. I really don't think you would have any defectors from this piece of writing, just a lot of sore heads and badly bitten nails. Especially after THAT ending ..........
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!! Cant believe a cliff hanger at such a vital moment!! i'm in love with this story. Too excited for words for the next one. Been addicted since chapter one. Keep up the good work!! XXx
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay lady. You had me worried there. I was going through withdrawls. So, thank you for the effort.

Now on to the story. Shika is a kickass friend for life. He knows Naruto pretty well. With all the name dropping, I am now curious if any of those names will drop into the story... like Gaara perhaps. Oh, and I just about died with laughter (while secretly reading at my desk at work because I couldn't wait till I got home) when Naruto told Konohamaru like it was. At least he isn't hiding his true personality.

One other thing I don't think Sakura realizes she will have to work on in addition to her anger is her obsessive nature considering what she did to Sasuke.

But now at the end, you are breaking my heart. Not only did Neji breakup with Naruto, but Naruto is holding off Sasuke indefinitely to forever. Ah!!! What is the world coming to? Okay, I can understand taking a break and dealing with yourself, but its still depressing.

Oh well. I definitely can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay Naruto! Way to grow a set!