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for Making "The Lucky"

by ladygizarme

schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
omgosh I LOVED LOVED LOVED this story. Soooo many awesome things about it. I loved the interactions between all the characters. Naruto all competitive, Sasuke pining for Naruto, Sai was just hilarious (shouldn't there be some chest compressions was my favorite line from him lol), Itachi changing the apartment and then changing it back... oh just everything! Awesome awesome awesome!
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh... and you should totally repost it or something for those who only get around to keeping up with the latest stories because people are definitely missing out. Maybe you could add an epilogue of when the movie comes out on video and Kakashi includes that CPR kiss scene in the extra deleted scenes... yeah that would work :)
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I suck at leaving reviews, but I thought I'd stop by and say I saw, I read, I loved!
person Colter
schedule November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally review stories but I just had to tell you that yours was awesome. It is quite possibly the best NaruSasu fanfic I've seen. I really love that everyone hits Sai for being an idiot because that is so funny^-^. The cats were a sweet touch too!
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ah. Agsty goodness. Thanks.
person FireonIce
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yesss I love a long, established one shot. It was fantastic. Your Sai made me laugh so hard omg he was so shameless and oblivious XD Really really good. Took me a while to read and I stayed up a bit later then I probably should have but it was so worth it <3 I hope you do more like this again, it's probably one of my favourites now :3
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lurved it. <3
person Anon
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow!...Just WOW!!! Awesome story and amazing writing, I loved it!!
person Raina
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was so much fun to read! I really enjoyed myself with this story!! It's just been so long since I got lost in such lighthearted fun. I found myself really engulfed in the story that I was even leaning forward toward the monitor in some parts and gasping aloud at others. I laughed, I giggled, and I smiled throughout. I loved all your characters especially Sai's social inept tendencies. You explained Sasuke in such a heart warming and sympathetic way. I hate to use this word but this was so cute! Though this kept me up later than I thought, I am really happy that I read this! Thank you so much for sharing this.
person kinai26
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
#wipes bleeding nose# wow, so goddamn hot.