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January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story was long... and amazing. I mean god at first I thought you were overzealous about doing your first chapter but when I saw the the blue bar shrink to a thick little line I knew this had to be a one-shot. But wow what a one-shot it was. I liked the whole behind the scenes feel that you gave the story and how you utilize every character to the best of their abilities in the world you created for them.
I was really curious to see what Kakashi was reading for those scripts and omg I freaking load the whole stalker reveal moment. Everything was my favorite part in this story but the Calvin Klien poster and then the confession about the tabloids as well as the bulletin board made me want to yell at my computer screen and tell blondie to run for the hills. I mean cause no one really realizes that celebrities can be stalkers too and he proved it too in a big way. I was halfway expecting Sasuke to close the door and ask an ususpecting Naruto in the bathroom if he liked what he saw. Also halfway expected a shrine too but found it in the bulletin board.
Omg I love Sai's comments here and there and when he tried to lift up Naruto's shirt and Sasuke walked in I laughed at the visual of the two freezing. Or when he was left alone in the kitchen with Sasuke describing Naruto's penis I nearly joked on my water. My god you know how to make someone laugh. And I love how Sakura was secretly trying to hook them up and not going all obssessing like to snatch up Sasuke.
My god you have such an interesting imagination when you had that life-sized picture of Sasuke on the toilet blown up in full color with the make up on his face. I nearly died of laughter as much as Sasuke must have died of amusement. You are some sick, evil genuis for sure. I was just thinking how Naruto would have just stared at that for hours in amusement and amazement before taking a picture to laugh at alter before rubbing it in Sasuke's face.
Oh but seriously this is really good and I know it's not possible but you should totally do a sequel or something. A sequel of the movie with additional cast members to shake things up like maybe one of Naruto's old boyfriends joins the cast as a love interest or something and Sasuke isn't really feeling that or something while he has to deal with the anxiety of introducing his boyfriend to his parents. I don't know, I don't care, it'd be legendary either way. Just love, love, love... and now I'm done T_T
I was really curious to see what Kakashi was reading for those scripts and omg I freaking load the whole stalker reveal moment. Everything was my favorite part in this story but the Calvin Klien poster and then the confession about the tabloids as well as the bulletin board made me want to yell at my computer screen and tell blondie to run for the hills. I mean cause no one really realizes that celebrities can be stalkers too and he proved it too in a big way. I was halfway expecting Sasuke to close the door and ask an ususpecting Naruto in the bathroom if he liked what he saw. Also halfway expected a shrine too but found it in the bulletin board.
Omg I love Sai's comments here and there and when he tried to lift up Naruto's shirt and Sasuke walked in I laughed at the visual of the two freezing. Or when he was left alone in the kitchen with Sasuke describing Naruto's penis I nearly joked on my water. My god you know how to make someone laugh. And I love how Sakura was secretly trying to hook them up and not going all obssessing like to snatch up Sasuke.
My god you have such an interesting imagination when you had that life-sized picture of Sasuke on the toilet blown up in full color with the make up on his face. I nearly died of laughter as much as Sasuke must have died of amusement. You are some sick, evil genuis for sure. I was just thinking how Naruto would have just stared at that for hours in amusement and amazement before taking a picture to laugh at alter before rubbing it in Sasuke's face.
Oh but seriously this is really good and I know it's not possible but you should totally do a sequel or something. A sequel of the movie with additional cast members to shake things up like maybe one of Naruto's old boyfriends joins the cast as a love interest or something and Sasuke isn't really feeling that or something while he has to deal with the anxiety of introducing his boyfriend to his parents. I don't know, I don't care, it'd be legendary either way. Just love, love, love... and now I'm done T_T
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January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was so much fun! Just long enough and very interesting, well written and – I surely motioned a lot of fun by now. Because it was.
I loved it how Sasuke wasn’t even aware of the rivalry Naruto was so stuck on, too busy ogling him in newspapers and, er, in his bathroom. I also liked Sai. People usually go overboard with his ‘penis jokes’ but you did that part to successfully that was actually, for once, amusing to read. All characters slid into their places in this au with a natural ease. Every time you introduced someone, I’d think ‘well, of course, that makes perfect sense’.
And of course, the way Sasuke announced his feelings at the end was just a cherry on top of a delicious cake. I’m going to put this on my recs list (if you have nothing against it) and the fact that I update that thing maybe twice a year should tell you more than my clumsy attempts at leaving a review ever could.
I loved it how Sasuke wasn’t even aware of the rivalry Naruto was so stuck on, too busy ogling him in newspapers and, er, in his bathroom. I also liked Sai. People usually go overboard with his ‘penis jokes’ but you did that part to successfully that was actually, for once, amusing to read. All characters slid into their places in this au with a natural ease. Every time you introduced someone, I’d think ‘well, of course, that makes perfect sense’.
And of course, the way Sasuke announced his feelings at the end was just a cherry on top of a delicious cake. I’m going to put this on my recs list (if you have nothing against it) and the fact that I update that thing maybe twice a year should tell you more than my clumsy attempts at leaving a review ever could.
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow it was long.hehe... i really like ur SAI though and your concept as well. it was fun reading ya!
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cute~!
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It took me over an hour to read this fic, but it was awesome! I loved how one minute we were on the set,then another we were in the dressing room, then back on set, it felt up beat and fast paced as I can imagine a movie set would be. I adored Sasuke and how you eased him out of himself as he got closer to Naruto. The plot was awesome, the character development amazing! And I'm just tickled pink because I love happy endings! Lol Sai was hilarious, I love him so much xD Just because he was Huge didn't mean Naruto was small! xD But of course, he probably wouldn't make that connection. I just love his social awkwardness! This was an amazing story and hope you write another soon! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story soooo much and the smexy scenes were the hottest thing have read in a long time even though it was not ful out sex. Awesome Writing!
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this!
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel so LUCKY to have fallen across this when i did! *claps hands together* So nice!! This one shot was so exhilarating! Sasuke was so daring in this, i even felt MY NECK HEATING UP..*laughs like a shy school girl* Yet i felt like Naruto was definitely the man in this, oozing all that uber hawtness..*heehee*