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Oh My Gosh that was just HOT!SEXY!STEAMY! and EROTIC!!! LOVE IT!!! That was just so much fun to read!!!

Can you just imagine how foggy the windows were after Naruto and Sasuke were done??? How in the world did Lee drive after that? heheeheh Bet as a bus driver he's used to such things going on. LOL

Geez, it annoys me deeply when people don't have sense to comment on a really good story. This should have way more reviews! This story is amazing. I really like your writing style and the way you were able to keep each character in check. In a setting like that you would think they would be OOC since they just met each other, but they weren't. I really enjoyed his story deeply. Look forward for more of your work =^_______^=

AH HA!!! I Knew your name sounded familar!! This fic was in my Need To Review folder,so now I'm reviewing! Lmao what an epic bus ride! If only most experiences with mass transit were as nice for us as it was for Naru and Sasu =/ Lol i love how Sasuke was so freaking stubborn xD I think I would have moved as soon as the stranger laid down,they wouldn't have had a chance to lay their head on my lap xD Lol i think only Naruto can get away with that kind of stuff =P I hope they end up seeing each other once again, who knows, maybe they'll end of sharing a cab and have more kinky mass transit sex, assuming the cabbie doesn't kick them out xD Since this is a oneshot my imagination is the limit xD Awesome fic! You have a ton of others to read! Better take this one step at a time C_C lol ja! XOXOXs Kei-CHan

like it a lot . i liked the plot and it was vary well written . i have never read a story with bus sex before i have to say i like it lol

Well that's a very wierd place to have sex. Not saying people wouldn't try to do it in a bus if they can get away with it but I've seen some freaky things on a bus... trust me. Aww I know this is a one-shot type of story but I really do hope they bump into each other somewhere in Boston. I can se Sasuke almost uncharacteristcally latching onto Naruto at a cafe or something after being forced to entertain his brother although Itachi will be sure to make things uncomfortable for them.

Love the very vivid description of the city. You droppedd me right into the story with ease. Was creep out along with Naruto when he came to the cheerful bus workers because honestly Mass Transit people usually seem to always seem to have a stick jammed up there asses. But I'm getting off track here ><

Awesome if a bit unsual premises for a christmas story XP

That's unsanitary, LOL.

Such a strange choice for the bus driver :/ Can you imagine the Lee the hyper green beast sitting in traffic, he'll jump out of his skin O.O