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for Just One More Birthday

by xtabluarasa

person anon
schedule August 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is such a good story! I can't wait for Naruto to come out of his coma.

person Sara
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story... I'm a sucker for serious drama. Add a little BL, a little romance, and realistic dialogue and you've got me. So... I definitely need more of this story. If I have to review it every day for a year... well I'll probably miss a few days, but I will do my darn best to let you know that you MUST finish it. ;)

Keep up the good work. I know how much a review helps with creativity. Well you have something wonderful here and I want to see how you handle it.
person Anon
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This subject is a tough one to tackle. From what I have read so far of this story, it is beginning to capture the despair, depression and hope of the main character and some of those who care about him. I hope to see how things will progress with a potential new relationship with Gaara (who stood by his friend in the worst of times) as well as see the fleshing out of the other characters in Naruto's life.
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter. Epsecially Gaara's fight with the clock...and naruto's commentary on Sakura's little life-rants. And a chapter that ends in good news, is always a good thing. ^_^ Update when you get the chance
~CP
person akinohanun
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is really good and cute... i cant wait to read more of when naruto comes out of the coma and dumps neji and goes with gaara.
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I liked it.
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just thought that I would let you know that while I might not comment on every chapter, I am loving this story so far. Every since the first chapter, I have been eagerly awaiting the next.
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aa chapter that ends in good news is always a good chapter ^_^
person RREADERR
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beutiful!!!!! Especially the part which Gaara had a battle with the clock. I was clutching my stomach trying to stop laughing! Very very impressive oh and UPDATE QUICKER *gets embarrassed like Hinata and looks away mumbling* if... You have... The time.. Ofcourse...
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Please continue. Hope you get better soon.