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August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy mother, I want to read more of this.
I wish I was a better artist so I could do the characters some justice, because the amount of description you've put in is absolutely deLICious.
I should like to try anyway, but my anatomy is...erm...questionable at present.
And I don't want to burn your eyes, because it would be so difficult for you to write anything before learning braile. >>
...I have found a goal! >3<
I wish I was a better artist so I could do the characters some justice, because the amount of description you've put in is absolutely deLICious.
I should like to try anyway, but my anatomy is...erm...questionable at present.
And I don't want to burn your eyes, because it would be so difficult for you to write anything before learning braile. >>
...I have found a goal! >3<
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January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Such an amazing description of naruto! Rock god vampire monarch Naruto huh.... that is something i'd pay to see. Too bad I'm such a slow artist cuz id draw that naruto gladly if it wouldn't take me a month to finish. Here's to hoping you decide to write another chap. Cuz I would love to see Naruto and sasuke's interactions with each other.
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't remeber if I already reviewed. Oh well. Beautiful intro.What a way to suck in the reader. Looking forward to the next update.
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uwaaaaahhh!! This came out so good! I enjoyed that part about the petitioners, and how it shows that Naruto not only rules over other vampires but that he also garners respect (and fear) from the humans in his domain. I felt so bad for Sasuke xD! Hahaha he really realize what was going on too late in the game and ended up in the middle of a bunch of hungry vamps interested in his blood xD I'm sure he doesn't have enough in his body to satisfy them all so he's lucky he got when and however he did, when he did. Too bad it wasn't just a freakishly realistic dream, haha waking up in bed only to find out that the King is in his room watching him xD So awesome, looking forward to more cuz I didn't see a note about this being a oneshot! *Does a victory dance* XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh, I love this.
Your imagery skills are amazing!
And at the end where Naruto is like "Did you sleep well my little rabbit?"
I was like "EEEEE! :D"
Anyway, I really do hope you continue with this.
It's an amazing start.
I was gonna say something else. . . . Oh! I don't know if you plan on having 'my little rabbit' being Naruto's nickname for Sasuke, but if you were, the French version of that is 'mon petit lapin'
Just something I learned when I was taking French classes. :]
Your imagery skills are amazing!
And at the end where Naruto is like "Did you sleep well my little rabbit?"
I was like "EEEEE! :D"
Anyway, I really do hope you continue with this.
It's an amazing start.
I was gonna say something else. . . . Oh! I don't know if you plan on having 'my little rabbit' being Naruto's nickname for Sasuke, but if you were, the French version of that is 'mon petit lapin'
Just something I learned when I was taking French classes. :]
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A hot sexy powerful and dominate naruto...WOOT!!! i'm on the edge of my seat right now. i want to know what happens next. That was a great beginning by the way. the details in your descriptions made me feel like i was right along side sasuke. i can't wait to read more. Happy writing!!!!
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January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Though it can't be a one shot cause you had more stuff you were talking about bringing in.
Love the imagery!
Love the imagery!
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January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Give. Me. More! That was amazing! Like Ah-MAZING!
Of course, that pink haired skank needs to go, but oh my gosh, you have such a beautiful way of writing. I could actually picture every word, every moment in my mind. Please tell me, you'll continue this.
Waiting,
Kiki
Of course, that pink haired skank needs to go, but oh my gosh, you have such a beautiful way of writing. I could actually picture every word, every moment in my mind. Please tell me, you'll continue this.
Waiting,
Kiki