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for Broke Straight Guys

by KaraMayonakaSora

person Alisha
schedule July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Super funny and adorable. I would really love to read more, so please continue this story!!!



Alisha
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Will you be updating this soon? This is a really great story and I am dying for more. :)
person juiz
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I *love* Sasori so much. I hope to see more of him in the future. I don't know why, but I picture him as Alucard from Hellsing in my mind. XDD It's a little weird cause they look nothing alike. But I love his flirty ways with Sasuke. Hope to see another chapter soon!
person mjaku
schedule May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know, I read this story in one night.

One. Night.

From 10 PM to 7 AM.

Yes, I'm serious.

And you just made me get hooked up to naruto shippuden AGAIN. I sweared almost one and half years ago that I would not watch naruto anymore, because it envelopes so much of my time but BAM there goes my promise, flying out of the window and here is one happy/crazy fangirl drooling over NaruGaa in the first season of Shippuden.

YES! ALL THIS BECAUSE YOUR FIC IS JUST SO UNBELIEVABLY AMAZiNG, YES THAT'S WHY.

And I don't even know should i hate you for making me crazy with waiting for the next chapter, or loving you and drowning you with virtual hugs because you are so amazing to make a fic like this.

*gives you the virtual hugs anyway*

I love the way you have described the characters and I just....I just can't wait to see Bee in Naruto shippuden XD I have to see if I can flail over the Gaara/Bee action in this even more than I already am after I have really seen him.

And Gaara moaning.....*gave herself a nosebleed*

Sorry about the incoherency, but hopefully you got the main idea XD

I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE YOUR FIC ANDAND I LOVE GAARA MOANING AND I LOVE NARUTO AND SASORI AND THE HYPOCRITE SASUKE AND....*rantsrantsrants*

...I'll shut up.
person Alicia
schedule May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh, this story is so gooood! But It also frustrates the hell out of me! Because I keep wondering if Gaara is ever going to end up with Naruto. Because at some point (if the story is heading that way) he and Bee will have to break up and that could get...nasty...

I won't give up on this story cause it is so damn good. Is there some direction this is going? Who is the final pairing. I think I might explode, It's doing my head in!

Update soon please! I need to get my BSG fix!
person Carousel
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter was excellent. I love this story so much and I was wondering when you were going to update. Still want Naruto to get with Gaara and Sasuke to get with Sasori...
schedule May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This chapter had so much going on!!! I hate you all the more since you only want to update once every decade! :Cries: I was so upset when it ended; and I'm totally left drooling for more. I do hope to see you soon.
person volaju66
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update! I loved it, though I feel a bit cheated with Gaara and Killerbee's first time. I can't help it, despite their being one of the crackiest couples I've ever read I love them together. Is it wrong of me to want Sasuke to end alone? Your depiction of him is spot on I believe but he's just not a character I like. Ah...can't wait for the next chapter!
person Carousel
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapter 13. Brilliant and hilarious as always. I really wanna see who the girl is. Could it be Karin?
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very interesting! I can't wait for naruto and gaara to get together already, and though i'd like to see naruto and sasuke do a vid together i think it'll be much more... fun for sasori to get him. anyhow, good job! keep working hard! the plot is original so yay for that, and you've got good character development. this is one of the few stories where i've gone back and reread it cause it was good and i'm waiting for mroe :)