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for Dirt on my hands and knees

by eternalshiva

schedule June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yumm-o
I never pictured it...Ino+Kiba
But now I'm picturing it! lol
I loved this story it was sooo good!
schedule June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it sooo much! Good job, good job :)

- shadow
person Anon
schedule June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Someone actually did something awesome with Kiba and Ino! Those two, especially Kiba don't get enought love. It was awesome! Hey, you ever thing about Shino? He gets very little love :( Maybe Shino and Sakura....perhaps...just through it out there.
Congrats! This fic is awesome!
person Geda
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I'm diggin' this. Keep up the good work.
person Zyion
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL I loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter. By the way I like the way you're writing, I like the detail and the overall quality of the story. Until next time

~*Z*~
person shourin
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thank you so much for writing this.love your writing style, and truth to be told, i was searching for a good fic with ino in it. you really made the ino pictured in my head perfectly written (you see, if i can't find one with good ino in it i was thinking to write one.. ^_^;;). the opening is perfect - the way you describe the complexity of her personality just right without overdoing it is really refreshing (dunno why, most writers in ff.net tend to distort ino's character into either stupid blonde bitch or super perfect smart, hot and sexy blonde, so... yeah...). thank you so much for sharing this, i will continue reading the next chapter happily.

shourin.
person shourin
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chapter 2 -

cool! it made me excited. geez, never thought a dirty smelly men could smell like that... could they? i mean, seriously?

ohh and lo and behold! the power of ino's seduction art. even her shadow couldn't resist ne?

shourin
person shourin
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chapter 3

uhmm... what jokes? (sorry for being so slow but.. really i dun get it)

progress progress... me is turning giddy. hehehhe.

shourin.
person shourin
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
why oh why must it end here!!!?!!

mou... *pouts*

shourin
person cynaga
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great and original story idea~! Very well written, too. More~!!!! Thanks.... =)