rate_review Reviews

I absolutely adore this story. Your writing is phenominal, pristine and realistic. I could imagine everything with such intensity! I still can't get the image of Naruto chopping wood out of my head;) This is simply a beautifully written story! I hope you continue it because I'm dying to know what's going to happen!<3

I loved this! I especially love the mysterious ending (even if you decide to continue it). I think ending it like that gives the story more hope for a happy ending, if that makes sense.

It was very realistic and creative and I am just addicted to your writing style, I swear.

Wow, nice work, I really enjoyed that! But I must admit after reading it I was kinda perplexed that you put it up as a oneshot - it kinda ends like an open story. Is there any chance that it DOES become one??? *offers lots of cookies* It's kinda nice finally seeing something from you again, I really miss Alternative Education and this kinda helps the waiting prosses until the last chapter. XD Anyway, I hope you decide to continue this one, if not - too bad, but still thumbs up from me! :D

Oh my, I loved this! I was on the edge of my seat following the build up of their attraction. Naruto's anger with himself, realizing what a jerk he was, but still unable to resist.. oh my, so real. It felt like everything built up at exactly the right intensity before finally exploding--and that was hot. The aftermath made my heart ache, but the ending gives me hope! *imagines an eventually-happy SasuNaruish closure lalala*

Wow! I can't wait to see if he finds Sasuke and what will Sasuke say when he gets there...Tell, I didn't see complete for this story. I hope not.

You mentioned before that your husband was working on something that would keep you from posting anything for the time being, so imagine my surprise when you posted this! And it's great, as expected of a writer of your calibre! I am so glad to see you here!

It seems a shame to stop the story here, though. Have you any plans to continue it, at least until Naruto achieves the closure he is seeking? I can use my imagination, sure, but it would be more fun to read your version of it. Pretty please?

Awe that ending was cute! Great place to leave off at =) Has my imagination spinning with possibilities =D I liked the whole build up of this story, it progressed at a nice rate and Sasuke and Naruto weren't cliched in that, after their tryst in the wind storm that they declared their undying love for one another. They got mad, and responded accordingly, but there was still enough there for Naruto to want to find his wayward tenant, and that was awesome. =) XOXOXs Kei-Chan