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for Grounded

by djserani

person SophaD26
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your story. It was sweet and sexy at the same time.
schedule December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So it ends. At lest I got to see Ino and Chouji again. Plus it was good to now she was the biggest. Any way it was a good story for the most part. Even if I did not like many of the pairings. I find my self like it now and again.
schedule December 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read more of this! You've got me crying, and I'm worried my husband will think something bad's happened when he comes back home! You're good!
person tjrender
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so well written. The lemons were actually more, they were real love stories, the action was breathtaking, and I got so into the Sakura/Kakashi story that I was in tears during "Pain". I'm really enjoying all of it and I watch for updates eagerly.
person MrsCake
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a such lovely story. The last Neji/Hina fic I read turned Neji into a raping maniac, jealous and obsessing over Hinata. It really turned me off of that pairing for a long time, but your story is really sweet and loving. And a definite two thumbs up for the Kakashi/Sakura storyline.
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this one! You definitely need to finish this fic! Love all the pairings, NejiHina especially! <3
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So two out of five are going to have baby. At lest thats what it looks like so far. Not to bady. I hope Tenten baby does get a jumpsuit. It will look to cute that way. Any way I see you update two more chapter so off to read those. I cant wait to see how Chouji take it.
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok read the two new chapters. I really like the part with Tenten and Ino told the boys they were going to have kids. That was fuuning and sweet. Last one I find all right but that most because I dont like that pairing but it was still good writing. I hope you skip a few months. I what to see if Ino get any food cravings or how big she gets. Plus it be fun to see what Tenten will be like pregnan.
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just finished this and I loved it!! Great work! Looking forward to seeing more from ya
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:SCream like a mad man: That was great!!! I love it ever time I read it and I all read it 3 times. Oh man please let Ino get fat with child{ I think Ino will look good with a little fat all her bones.} Man I cant wait to see what happen next in the story. I just hope that it wont end any time soon.