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by djserani

schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ShikaTema wiiiiiin!! :D
All of the stories were really sweet, though. It seemed like you thoroughly considered what made each pairing special and different when you wrote these. Thanks for the fix!
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Five plus are not a enough for how good this was. I mean dame that was great and I so hope this story is not going to end soon. As I what to read more. Plus it looks like no one use save sex{ at lest the two I read.} So lest hope no one gets kids... cut that I hope InoChou get kids.
Last thing. Thank you for the thought of Ino in only a apron makeing pancakes. Thats going to be stock in my head all day.
person cynaga
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love these warm and fun one-shots~!
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it.It was a very sweet lemon. The best part for me was the end were Temari could not make up her mind so she did both. Any way looks like ChouIno is the lest one. Good the best is all was save for lest.
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not to bad. The idea of the story is a blane but your writeing is good and you have my two top pairing in it[Ino/Cho Shika/Tema].So I most like keep a eye on it.
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well that was quick. I cant wait to see what the sex are like for some of the pairing. Why other I'm just going to skip over. Good work so far but I hae to ask some thing. Any way could you make Chouji use the Partial Multi-Size Technique? I'm onlytalking about the dick. I mean could use it on his fingers as well.