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by xkuramaxhieix

schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww that wasn't enough >.> Was that chapter really needed o.O Give me my juicy action XD
person LadyWolf
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't hate you....I say kill her!! I don't like her in this...she knows that Naruto is the one for Sasuke but she thinks that she STILL can seduce him.....what an idiot!

Post soon!
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! Fight!


Actually, I really liked this chapter. As I commented before, I thought the last chapter was really weird, out of place and out of character. This chapter makes the last one make much more sense.

What was wrong with Sakura? It's really interesting the differences Naruto can sense with his new fox chakara. I guess there's got to be a big difference tapping into it as a demon than a human. I found this chapter intensely interesting.

Keep up the great work! As always, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. ^^
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter seemed out of place with a very OOC Sakura. Her actions seemed a bit too extreme and delusional. After three years of no Naruto, she suddenly pulls this now? Its odd. Ok yeah, I get that Naruto had his suspicion that Sakura may have assume his identity in the past to try and sleep with him, but even Sakara's selfish and greedy reasoning (money and not having to work? wth?) seemed off.

HOWEVER - Naruto's grand reappearance,fox eyes and everything, was freaking awesome! It seems Sasuke doesn't have any more doubt as to his identity. I can't wait for the next update to see what happens.

Great chapter. Keep up the good work!
person richon
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahahaah sasukra you are a bitch !!!I throuth you where naru and sasu friend !!! Hope you will pay!! i really enjoy reading this story see you soon!!
person lryne
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!!!

sakura deserve the punch! that b**** trying to seduce sasuke! good thing sasuke was angry at her, i just wish sasuke will hunt her down..haha


i just hope that sasuke and naruto will not fight!

please update soon
person smint45
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chappie was wonderful!!!! Sakura is such a bitch!!! I really like Sasukes reaction on her outfit!!! And Naruto is kind of sweet how he tries to calm Sasuke down!!! They are such a cute couple!!! If only Sasuke could jup over his shadow to realise that!!! Are Narutos eyes that way cause of him beeing half kyuubi now??? Well anyway fantstic chappie!!!! I can't wait for more!!! See you soon!!!!
person waveshrike
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You just had to ruin a perfectly good story with the typical Sakura-is-trying-to-get-Sasuke-away-from-Naruto, didn't you? Why not some other girl? Or a guy if you insist on making the boys gay? This chapter was pointless and speaks of both the characters and the author of being in their very early teens. I should think that Sakura being around him for so long would have realized that Sasuke doesn't want anyone other than his chosen. If you needed some action, why not have a foreign ninja/person try for him? That would make more sense than what you just did.
person lryne
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lovely!

thanks for the update anyway!

im so happy that naruto is progressing even though not that much but at least sasuke is step by step letting naruto in in his life again!


please update soon
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Does that prove the way to the heart is through food ^_^ Wow Sasuke sold out for some tomatoes in an omelet rofl