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by xkuramaxhieix

person smint45
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Noooo that can't be!!! Naruto died?? Well that explains why he was gone but thats so terrible!!! Did Kuubi reawaken him??? Aww I don't want to see Sasuke when he learns about that!!!! I hope Sasuke will be ok and stop with the cuting when he realises naruto is back!!!! And you are right I think Sasuke at the window with the blood smeared over it would make a wonderful fanart!!!! Too bad that I have not talent for drawing either!!!! I'm so happy you updated so soon!!! I really hope to see you again just as soon!!!!
person NinPao
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start and it's interesting to see how far Sasuke has gone. Please continue for sure!
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You tantalize me with your words. I really like this chapter and how Kyuubi saved him from death very cool way to do it. Thank you for another great chapter.
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Merger=awesomeness!!!

I absolutely love the conditions you put forth to Naruto's new demon status. Very interesting. Although I thought it was particularly funny that Naruto completely ignores the fact that the fox tells him he was never fully human to begin with and writes off demon drawbacks, such as animals not trusting him, to the simple and oblivious "animals never liked me anyway." Ha! Thats so Naruto. ^^


Keep up the great work!
person smint45
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! I'm happy you updated so soon!!!! I really liked Sasukes outfit!!!! He's so hot!!!! I can't wait for him to realise that Naruto is really Naruto!!!! Aw but he is so much like Gaara at the moment!!! It's kind of sad how much his love for Naruto destroyed him with him gone!!! I hope everything will turn for the better!!! Perhaps somebody did something to naruto then they could both persue this person together to strengthen their bond!!!! I can't wait for you next update!!! hope to see you soon!!!!
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great meet-up! Sasuke kicked his ass! Loved the outfit. Keep up the great work!
person Kaliu6-san
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmm, i really want to see how this will turn out! Good work so far and hope you update soon!
person Kerrisa
schedule January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The outfit was nice xD I feel bad for Sasuke, and kind of upset with him for causing such a ruckus and killing so many people! But Sasuke has never been 100% there so it can't be helped =/ I can't believe Naruto's friend's paraded around as him (on more than one occasion!) thinking that it would help Sasuke, when it obviously didn't. You'd think after the first clone they'd have wizened up... Guess not C_C XOXOXs Kei-Chan
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww next week is like so far away *pout* I hope that outfit is awesome ^_^
Hokage Sasuke ftw O.O
person smint45
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was so fantastic!!!! I really love this story!!!! And Sasuke is so sweet doing all this for Naruto!!! I really hope he doesn't kill him in the next chappie!!!! But probably he will not believe that Naruto is back!!! Well after such a long time that is understandable!!! I really want to know what happen to Naruto and why he can't remeber beeing gone for three years!!! I can't wait for more!!!! See you in a week!!!!