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for Gone

by xkuramaxhieix

schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow this is really interesting....i can't wait to see what you come up with.
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!!!! OMG! You updated... AGAIN! Ah! Is it my birthday? [Reviewer's note: No. No it isn't.]


Dude, this story is awesome. You keep updating like this and I can promise a review for every I read. :D

As for Sasuke's outfit, I don't see what's wrong with either simple black (no frills, as Sasuke seems like he's in a dark, not-caring-for-fashion place) or Hokage cloak (sans hat, cause really, the hat seems ceremonial at best.)

This story is so exciting. Keep up the great work!
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooOOOooo Speculation time!
(Yes, I realize this is a second review for the 2nd chapter, but I saw someone above wonder what happened to Naruto and there is nothing I love more than speculation...)

Ok, so here's what I think: Naruto didn't "survive" the explosion. I don't think he's human anymore. I think when that nin he was tracing exploded, he took out Naruto's physical form with him when he went. Kyuubi had to go into overdrive or merger mode and the two were fused and what was left of Naruto had to lay dormant until he was able to reform - 3 yrs later. Thats why when he woke up he was all covered in vines and what not. Not quite a Rumpelstiltskin moment, but there you go.

I have no idea if that's right or way off the grid, but I don't care. This story is very exciting and I'm sure whatever you come up with will be awesome! Until then! :D
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why??????? Did you leave we the readers hanging like that? Okay, my whinning is done please hurry with the next one. PLEASE :)
person smint45
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning!!! A bit confiusing but that will probably get better when the story continues!!!! Hope to see you soon!!!
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!

Update soon!
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's an evil cliffhanger. Gone for three years...wow! I wonder what happened. I need to know so update soon, please.
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I want moar moar MOAR!!!! please ^_^
person DJfrdrck
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It sound really goo. So please continue and keep up the good work.