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So fucking hot and well written, you're good!

You know, I think out of all of them (up until R&B, that is), this has to be the toughest one to read. You know quiet well how I feel about Mr. Prissy Pants. But even before Checkmate, there was still enough of Sasuke's background to understand why he can be such a prick. And somewhere in all of there, there probably was a kernel of truth about wanting to do some of it for Naruto.

Anyway, the emotion, especially in the third part, really gets to ya. Well done, sweets. :D

Hey there, Darkprism :)

Just wanted to quickly review and let you know how amazing I think your fics are.

I just read both Breaking Point and Breaking the Rules and both were truly brilliant. I agree with other reviewers; you capture the D/s lifestyle in a way that's completely real. There is so much more to D/s than many think, and your fics give an accurate representation of it.

With regard to Sasuke and Naruto, I love your portrayal of both characters. It's always nice to see people writing NaruSasu (that's what I prefer to write, myself). I agree with QueenofQuills, when you look deeper the NaruSasu combination works so well, especially if you stay true to the original characters and don't make Sasuke weak and feminine. Your fic captures that perfectly, and doesn't portray the submissive as being weak.

I really, really enjoyed it; the audio recording too.
I look forward to reading more of your works.
~dusk. xo

love it :D More please.

I would really love to see a story that builds up to this relationship. Needless to say, that would be ridiculously long considering the history with Naruto and Sasuke. But It would be awesome if you saw fit to do that.

The audio version of chapter two of this story is amazing. The way you read it makes it so intense and Kiba is such a great aspect to this story, the way he talks so suits his character. I've said this many times but I just think Naruto seme and Sasuke uke is so much more realistic when you take a close look at the characters. Sure Naruto is senstive and forgiving but he never backs down to anyone and you have him just perfect in this story. Also, he if I do find Sasuke uke stories they usually portray Sasuke as weak and despite his submissive personality as is seen through the way he allows himself to be used by Itachi, Orochimaru and at the moment Madara, he is by no means weak and it seriously annoys me when people write him like that which is why your story is so refreshing. A submissive doesn't have to be weak, in fact it takes a lot of strength to yield and your portrayal of Sasuke's mischievious personality adds a lot to the character.

I also like the way Naruto (despite being surprisingly lenient of Sasuke's disrespectful behaviour) gives Sasuke his comuppance.

Again, the audio version of this chapter was amazing, if I closed my eyes it almost felt as if I was watching. And mother of God was chapter two intense. Anyway, your writing is amazing and I hope to hear more Naruto/Sasuke audio chapters.

Best Wishes QueenofQuill.

that was heart breaking ... I know they love each other and all but it just kills me that people in love can hurt each other like this just to make a point ... but in the end Naruto is such a sweetheart & Sasuke is a stubborn bitch.

btw I would really like to know about Shika's first night at break & did they play or not ;) the whole thing IN DETAIL :D

...OMG this story was very nice....very nice. I felt bad for Sasuke but I can understand Naruto as well. Very intense at the end. This story had me trembling with anticiption for what was gonna happen next. Very good.

As screwy as their relationship can be, they really have a strong bond. This had to be one of the sweetest stories I have read here. Really nice.

Wow, I must say this was really intense story and at some point I really couldn't stand anymore how they tortured Sasuke and how Naruto treated Sasuke because Naruto was the first one who messed up, if he didn't mess up then Sasuke wouldn't be so frustrated in the first place...
This is amazing story I really enjoyed reading it :) Is there sequal?