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I never thought that I would find a story with Hinata/Hanabi pairing that is somewhat serious and yet full of siblings love and sex, and what do you know? It's this one! :) I already read both chapters, but... somehow... could you please consider writing a third chapter? Where Hanabi would overcome her, well, barriers and please Hinata as she was pleased by her? I understand if you won't, could you just please think about it? And thank you for what you wrote so far, it's one of my most favourite stories about Hinata.

cool story, it would be nice to have a few scenes in which their mother watches Hinata and Hanabi have sex. update soon.

Very interesting story so far, I hope you'll post more soon.

Continues Interessante

Ah, finally, a Hanabi/Hinata story that's worth reading. Great job on this, very nicely written and thought out, the characterizations fit splendidly as well.

Now, before I forget, you have one or two words that don't fit: 'removed the abstraction to her final goal.' is the most notable one. Also, you used a lot of 'she' and 'her' and at times that made things a little confusing but not terribly so.

Anyway, great job, I truly enjoyed it, and out of curiosity will there be more chapters or is this it?

Very interesting start. I can't wait to see how Hinata's sexual training of Hanabi goes.