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(3) Just found and read your story and loved it, I had forgotten just how adorable Hinata and Naruto can be :) (it's been awhile since i read a story about them). First thing about the story, I think Hinata's just using the excuse of locking up to drive Naruto nuts since most people do that before going upstairs and getting changed ;) The second thing is the clones, I liked how they interacted not only amongst themselves but also with Naruto and Hinata.^^

As for Naruto and Hinata they are just wonderful together and the sex is very hot too ;) There's a confidence and ease between them and their relationship, it's nice to see how both of them have changed and grown and yet the portrayal of each suits their characters perfectly. I especially loved the teasing and bantering between them, you have such an awesome sense of humour ^_^

I'm really looking forward to more and can't wait for the next update :D

Love. This. Story.

Thanks to this story I am now suffering from fluff-overdose and loving it! I never read the original "Clones" but think this story's great so far, looking forward to the next chap!

You know a story's good when you don't even mind that the latest chapter didn't have any smut in it! The chapter was great even if it was the obligatory "flashback to how they got together" chap (which is really important, I hate when fics stick 2 people together without any explanation at all). And I'm loving the little bits of humour stuffed into the fic, a couple random examples being, "Hinata straightened carefully, literally with the downcast eyes of a puppy that just had one of those accidents which required newspapers." and Naruto's reaction to the clone last chapter.~

I'm with E-writer, you really know how to write. You modestly called it fluff at the end, but just calling this fluff doesn't do it proper justice. It was hot, creative, perfectly captured the characters, (at least how one would believe them to be after tying the knot), and best of all, it had real heart, really. I could feel it. That's how good you are. I'll be looking for more from you. Dattebayo.

Chiao

Good job on the best lemon story I've ever read. Well written and very hot and not out of control like many other lemons I've read, where it is obvious that the author is not too experianced. Keep up the great work can't wait for more