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That was so beautiful! The way you describe everything that goes on makes it so easy to picture it all in one's mind. Thank you for taking me along Neji's and Shikamaru's journey.

Alright. So when y!gal was going down for maintenance, I thought there's a chance it might be going down for good, and whose writing did I want to maybe save, in case it's not posted anywhere else. I thought of you. But lovely dear you are, you have your works in a few places. :) Which brought me here. And I finally took the time to read Undercurrents and..... love! I cannot gush enough about this. It's length is something I adore, I never once got bored, and I adored the relationship between Shika and Neji. Since I've now read your NaruSasu works and this, I can say I love your characterization. Really. I feel like you do a very good job at making the characters feel real and individual, clearly separated from one another without being extreme. It just makes the believability of the whole world, which, as a reader, is one of my top priorities. Like I mentioned, I cannot say enough praise. I find NejiShika so easy and right, and comforting. Like, yeah, there's definitely shit sometimes, and there's a world of pain in the past for Shika, but this is clearly just so right. The scene with Kakashi, Neji, and Sasuke confronting Kabuto was ...(I need better words than just a bunch of positive descriptions). It was hard. But it was written so clearly, I could picture it all very easily. Actually, a lot of your writing was that way. Neji's dungeon. Shika smoking outside. The living room and kitchen at Neji's. Just guhhh, I have so many images in my head, and I sometimes have difficulty with that. So thank you, thank you, thank you, for such clear and talented writing. And I don't know yet if you have anything written (I know there are a couple sidefics), but I'd love to see these two a couple years from now. When I reread Salvation, and Sasuke mentioned the difficulties that come in a relationship with time, I though, yeah, I'd love to see Neji and Shika a few years down the road. Also, something about Sasuke saying that made me think he recognized that 1) Neji and Shika will be together for years, 2) they will have difficulty but 3) they have a (so so so much) healthier relationship and oh Sasuke, baby, I love you, but you're so difficult. Uggu. It's writing like yours that takes my love of these characters and increases is tenfold. Okay, I seriously don't know if any of this made sense, and I know I've been rambling, I apologize. ;A; But thank you for writing and sharing! :D

I was wondering if there will be a side story on the going to club break. I love your writing style and hope that you write more. I can't wait to see what happens with garra and kiba. Thankyou for your time and passion of writing

i have greatly enjoyed this sotry and altering affection any chance of you posting gaaras story? now i'm curious

The ending was so beautiful and so touching I loved it every word every action. But what they did before omg the wax uh is now my favorite thing ever, it was masterfully written. Reading this was a mix of emtions and likes and dislikes but I overall loved it and really enjoyed the venture. You're a good writer I hope someday you do more Shika/Neji in a different environment. You rock you're story rocks thank you.

This was a great piece of fiction! You really created some good characters and the story was awesome!! Great work.

I knew there was a reason why Neji/Shika were my number 2 couple...they are so hot together it's unreal.
I love the way you wrote this, this was excellent!!!

I enjoyed every minute...!!!

Wow! I think chapter 16 is my new favorite and I wanna praise you for it but I'm kinda tongue tied right now, wow!

All right! Neji finally DID IT! And what an utterly sweet ending. I'm so jealous!

Someone come to my house and make me pancakes please...

This was WONDERFUL! Thanks for inviting us lower life forms into the exalted world of Monoshizu--oh hell, I can't do it. But thank you thank you thank you!!!!!

You have done the impossible. You have made BDSM romantic. BRAVA!