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for Undercurrents

by Darkprism

person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story that I had to read it again and I noticed something in chapter 8 and I have to ask: When Gaara said that he was irritated by humanity and about some person... Did he think about Kiba? Or is it just coincidence?
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit!
person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
For chapter 20: WOW,... I mean... WOW. :)
person qwerty
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! The anticipation keeps building and building! So good!
Keep going!
person Shikeji
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG chapter 12 was wow! Brilliant and delicious like my favorite snack. Loved every minute of it especially the end with Neji listening to the sweet sounds of Shikamaru suffering I mean enjoying his release. With the whimpering the crying I loved it. But my favorite part was the very end with the bathtub and going to bed, Shikamaru waiting around because he didn't know what part of the bed to sleep in, so cute. Bravo you've made me a sadist.
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
God I love the way Neji handles his business!
person cynaga
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So nicely written~! You are particularly good at drawing out forplay/emotions of desire ... you probably are, or would make, a great Dom. ;)
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gah!!

You tease!

You.. you... It's not nice to get someone worked up and not give them anything. *pouts*
person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, just amazing chapter 19... I can't wait for next chapter. hehehe Shika's reaction on Neji's rules was so funny and so troublesome :)
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit I've never wanted to be a fly on the wall so much!!

They are in so much trouble...