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Wow now I know why bondage is so great, chapter 11, awsome delicious nasty good stuff. Loved the teasing. I am loving Neji's voice with the commands too. Its still hard for me to get used to the pet, and boy sir talk but I'm getting there.

Such vulnerability! It's so frightening...good thing Shikamaru has someone like Neji to be vulnerable with. What power Neji wields! And now, Shikamaru is confident enough to ask for more. That is SO SEXY.

I know where this is going, and I can't wait to get there!

Great chapter... I really love it... It is always funny to see how Shika even though he is such a genius he can't so easily to say what he has on his mind.

“Well, if it’s any consolation, Spock, it takes quite a bit of work.” ...Genius. The 'Spock' comment had a grin splitting my face. Loved it.

On another note, do we get any Iruka/Kakashi love? Those two are so adorably sexy.

Oh god. I drool nonstop with this Fic. I never thought that Shikamaru and Neji could be or SOUND so hot in my head, I think you have a true talent for putting these two together. I hate to think that this is coming to an end. Makes me really want to cry. But I want to say that you have inspired me to do something completely out of my element. Like, I think I want to start my own Fic and stuff like that. I love the whole BDSM scene and all that. The whole pathetic uke and overly powerful seme fucking his brains out. Haha, just gets me all pink in the face... either way. If there was anything that I could do to get you to like, continue the Fic for me, I would sooooooooooooooooooo do it. Anyway, yes thank you. Hmmm, I'm thinking own of own Fic in my head now. Making me all smiley and giggly.

I love this story. I used to think that the whole Master and slave relationship was a bunch of crap but you make it something almost beautiful with the trust and knowledge that the partners have in each other. And, for some reason, I really like the rules that they have when playing and the rules of the relationship. You do this really really well. I see others try and tackle this genre but so far you are the only one that seems to get it. Nice!

This story is brilliant! I love neji/shika pairing. They are just too sweet. I appreciate all the time and thought you put in to this - its amazing. Including those sketches and layout plans was damn impressive. I hope you're doing well and I will be on the watch for the next chapter. Sexy board games ; ]

Of all things to catch my attention in this chapter is something I believe to be minute, yet I think it is such a driving force behind the Neji/Shika dynamic that you have created here.

I have commented before how I quite enjoy your characterization of Neji and how you present him as "real" as opposed to this untouchable and infallable godlike figure that many portray him as in fiction whether he be in a dominant or submissive role. Now, as the dominant here in your fiction you have completely blown that "ideal" out of the water (excuse the cliche) with the relationship that you have created here with Shika. You have slowly built up to this throughout the fic, but I believe this chapter takes it to a head, even moreso than the chapter before it when Shika assumes the role of "seme" which we really know means nothing in terms of control.

Neji's almost uncontrollable desire to have Shika is breathtakingly beautiful and it brings to life his "humanness". You have taken the Hyugga "prince" and made him conventional (but uncommonly so - contraditory but you understand my point) through the delicious Nara male to the point where it is the Hyuuga bending to the Nara will. Another author, and if she is reading reviews knows who she is, has done this also in her fiction. This dynamic has always floored me as a reader and I believe it is no easy feat to pull off as artistically and tastefully as you and she have. And once again, the sex has nothing to do with it! As they are both intellectual and geniuses at that - to seem them let go and just feel! Indescribable!

Also, I must comment on Neji's climax as he looks up into the trees. The imagery there - WOW! I am truly speechless as yet again, you make the smallest details larger than life.

In many stories and novels once a relationship is established the tension is gone and the characters become less interesting, but yours have not. The more I read the story the more I love the tension is still strong and the characters have not gone stale. Nice work!

I'm looking forward to the chess game and what's going to happen after it. I've been reading this right along and it's going sooo well. I love what happened to Kabuto for what he did to Shika and the aftermath of that for Shika and Neji was very hot and sweet. Keep up the amazing work and update soon!