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I just can't wait for next chapter.... Hahaha it was so funny that Shika didn't return Neji's laces :) haha

I can see the green canopy. You paint amazing images with words. I applaud you.

Alright I'm sold now, chapter 7 got me. It was too sweet and so natural and real in conversation. I'm liking the secrets Neji has about Break I feel like Shikamaru and can't wait to find out more. You're detailing on scenery and location is awsome. Shikamaru is being adorible now that I'm aware and understand his past issues being a sub and all. I see so much of my 'personal in my head' Neji in the Neji you have written here I love it. His touch fettish and his inner giddiness, is that spelled right lol. I like how you incorporate the other characters from Naruto. I can't wait to read more it really does stay in my head all day and I'm anticipating the next day when I can read another chapter, one a day I like to pace myself. And I'm thinking about reading your naruto/sasuke's next I love them as a pair but reading them as main characters I don't do often unless a friend tells me to because I'm a bigger neji/shika fan hence my username.

Chapter 16 was very sweet and I loved chapter 15... the whole revenge thing. This is such a well spun story with great development and thought. Great job!

OH man, the last chapter was just delicious!! I wanted to see Neji get his beautiful skirt-wearing ass fucked by Shika and you provided it. Thank you!!

Fantastic chapter ;) I really enjoy it... Please, can you put Altering Affection here also :)

''Neji-in-hot-outfit-semi-bottoming-to-Shika-while-he-says-THANKYOUSIR! ''
Oh, that's just perfect!
So hot! Shika acting all submissive and serving Neji, while still calling him Master and Sir,
while Neji let himself be the dominant sub this time (and keeping control, even though he let Shika do as he pleased..
And that was pleasing Neji. XD). That's just too hot.

Awwww, the ending was so cute!
By the way, ''Shut up, sir'' was a win.

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!

I am so very intrigued by this. Its baffling and kinda off but interesting. I'm not used to Neji being the dominant one or Shikamaru being all issuey, yes its a word now, lol. And every once in awhile Neji's speech pattern is kinda ooc to me and I'm kinda against the over use of Shika for narration but so far those are the only things making me feel weird while reading. Not that it matters the story is written and can't be changed anyway other than those things so far and I'm on chapter 4, this is really interesting a keep me in my seat wanting more making me question whats next. I like it.

Oh My God! I am officially addicted to your stories! All of them! The relationships and thw whole S&M, it's been a while since I first saw it so well writen! This chpater was amazing, just AMAZING! Can't wait to read the rest!

That was amazing and certainly brighten up my day!
Great chapter!