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by Darkprism

person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter... It was so funny for me to read this chapter :) because it is so obvious that Neji can't put up with Sasuke ;) Sasuke is just too much for him, wild and manipulative, with the mind of his own... just like Sasuke said: Naruto owns his body but not mind hehehehe... Neji prefer more tamed and obeyed subs... but not Sasuke, he is just too much wild for him:) Sasuke is real challenge :)
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I knew it XD I just had a strange feeling it was him. With him having Shika pretend to be a corpse >.> Total psycho bastard.
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14 was a separate story in itself.

"Girls – don’t make daddy separate you two,” Kakashi said, breaking some of the tension. PRICELESS!

Kakashi dressed as Cloud Strife is FTW.

Neji calling Sasuke a bitch is ...I don't even know what that is.

The scene in the club--unbelievable.

They make pretty toys, alright.

Someone PLEASE fanart Neji in a leather bandage-skirt and a leather/lace shrug. OMFG!
person Tyra
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, I can't believe how delicious you made Sasuke and Neji look! Just awesome.
Haha, If only Shika saw Neji now. In a slutty sub outfit. It seems dom AND sub seems fitting for Neji.

Kakashi is of course hilarious. And very in control.
It's so Sasuke and Neji to not get along with each other, but then again being able to wokr together.
And also support each other when the need comes.

After everything that man did to Shikamaru, I hope he will get what he deserves!
Can't wait to read more! Keep writing and update soon again!
person qwerty
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I cannot wait for Neji to exact his vengeance!
Keep going!
person LadyWolf
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You dress them up so gooD!!!! I would LOVE to see a picture of them!! They seem HOT!!!

Post soon!!!
person Carousel
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kabuto? =O I was surprised. I was expecting Hidan. Update again. I wanna know what happens. =]
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn DP, Carousel is so pissed she wants you to get Gaara's homocidal ass in on the shakedown! You have really stirred up something here!
person Carousel
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for poor Shika. =[ I started crying...

Please make the evil bastard's punishment awful. Get Gaara in on it. He doesn't give a fuck. Update soon, because this left me kind of violent.
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Totally thrilled with this story so far, and the latest update has me curious as to who it was that damaged Shika and exactly how they're going to be punished for it. I cannot wait to see what else is in store for Shika and Neji. Keep up the excellent work and thank you for sharing this story with the rest of us. ^_^ N