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February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohmygosh, Darkprism, I wrote the wrong review under the wrong story! That previous review was meant for Leilita-chan. So sorry, please ignore this. *apologizes a thousand times*
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February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I can't wait what will happen next in chapter 14... Neji is furious :)
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Those last few chapters were intense. I like what you do with this relationship and how you are working it out. Nice job.
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 was one of two I didn't get to read before. I am very pleased to be able to read it here. I can't say I'm feeling much empathy for a sub who would exploit Shikamaru in that manner.
And if Neji is in the mood to make breakfast, he can make a detour to my house sometime.
One more thing: consider yourself honored that Gaia77 wants to draw you fan art. She is sensational. I wish I could do what she does.
And if Neji is in the mood to make breakfast, he can make a detour to my house sometime.
One more thing: consider yourself honored that Gaia77 wants to draw you fan art. She is sensational. I wish I could do what she does.
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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmmhhh!
But, there are a few things that just jumped at me here in these chapters and like I said before, it's so not the sex for me here. Although MIND BLOWING! Again you have such a talent for making the simplest things, well in this case "words" larger than life. Neji calling Shika "baby" in the midst of a "scene" and Shika relinquishing control of himself and calling Neji "Master" in the midst of a "scene".... I don't even think I have the words to describe the level of sheer intimacy that you achieved there. I think they were more "naked" in that sense than literally. In my mind, those moments overshadowed the actual sexual acts, because the acts equated to or climaxed (excuse the pun) in those moments. I am sure that many would disagree, but that is just my take.
Neji and Shika through your words are simply beautiful!
I cannot wait for the morning after. Those scenes are always my favorite!
On a side note: cake and cookies are fabulous! And take your time on the note at ff.net... The fics are most important!
But, there are a few things that just jumped at me here in these chapters and like I said before, it's so not the sex for me here. Although MIND BLOWING! Again you have such a talent for making the simplest things, well in this case "words" larger than life. Neji calling Shika "baby" in the midst of a "scene" and Shika relinquishing control of himself and calling Neji "Master" in the midst of a "scene".... I don't even think I have the words to describe the level of sheer intimacy that you achieved there. I think they were more "naked" in that sense than literally. In my mind, those moments overshadowed the actual sexual acts, because the acts equated to or climaxed (excuse the pun) in those moments. I am sure that many would disagree, but that is just my take.
Neji and Shika through your words are simply beautiful!
I cannot wait for the morning after. Those scenes are always my favorite!
On a side note: cake and cookies are fabulous! And take your time on the note at ff.net... The fics are most important!
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. The after care scene was so sweet. =] I can't wait for more.
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February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not another cliffhanger! D:
Aside from that, it's an amazing story. No such thing as too much smut.
Aside from that, it's an amazing story. No such thing as too much smut.
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February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
After reading chapter 12, I think I need after care~! Seriously, you are killing me with this. (I love it :) )
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February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, this is such an amazing story. I can't wait to see what will be next. :) hehehe Neji is alarmed about every little thing which considers Shika, that is so cute, he really works hard in making Shika to feel comfortable and loved.
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February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*raises hand enthusiastically* If I volunteer to bring the candle and the matches, can I join in? I'll even let Neji do the thing with the sandpaper if he wants...