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July 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I am so late in reviewing this it's not even funny! Sorry about that but I' ve been away from the site for so long...
Anyway I really enjoyed it, found it actually fit with 'saviors' really well.
(A very belated) Thanks for the gift !
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I am so late in reviewing this it's not even funny! Sorry about that but I' ve been away from the site for so long...
Anyway I really enjoyed it, found it actually fit with 'saviors' really well.
(A very belated) Thanks for the gift !
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August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Pllleeeassse continue this fic!! The visual of Itachi's and Sasuke's faces with Naru telling them about chibi Uchihas would be hilarious :D
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May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh please please please continue this story I really love it, and would appreciate it if you kept writing it. Thank you.
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May 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aawwwwwwwwwww please continuet it!!!
At lest one more chapter!!!!
At lest one more chapter!!!!
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why won't you continue? MPreg can definitely add spice to the equation....
This was really good...but I hope you continue :o)
This was really good...but I hope you continue :o)
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please make another chapter for when they find out, PLEASE
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like this ending!
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hot. can't wait for the uchiha babies =3
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
After I read the summary, I actually didn't want to read your story. But I clicked on it nonetheless and was really surprised by the well written and intriguing start. Unfortunately you didn't use the potential for a great multi-chaptered thriller. You made it seem like Itachi/Sasuke are the perfect partners for Naruto from the start and since I expected some struggling and problems, I was really disappointed by how thing turned out.
It was too easy how everything just fell into place like there were neither difficulties nor complexes in between those three at all - which is not true, because as you already told us in your prologue, Sasuke, Itachi and Naruto are all very 'fucked up'. Sorry, but for me this turned out to be another of those PWP-stories where the sex at the end was all that mattered. Which is sad, because the start was so promising.
By the way, sorry for the bad English. I'm from Germany.
Smailii1805
After I read the summary, I actually didn't want to read your story. But I clicked on it nonetheless and was really surprised by the well written and intriguing start. Unfortunately you didn't use the potential for a great multi-chaptered thriller. You made it seem like Itachi/Sasuke are the perfect partners for Naruto from the start and since I expected some struggling and problems, I was really disappointed by how thing turned out.
It was too easy how everything just fell into place like there were neither difficulties nor complexes in between those three at all - which is not true, because as you already told us in your prologue, Sasuke, Itachi and Naruto are all very 'fucked up'. Sorry, but for me this turned out to be another of those PWP-stories where the sex at the end was all that mattered. Which is sad, because the start was so promising.
By the way, sorry for the bad English. I'm from Germany.
Smailii1805
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was absoloutly fantastic!!! And totally hot!!! Thank you so much for this story!!!