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for Power Trip

by Aleya

schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much for answering me. I'm happy you are still planing to write some more for it and I hope you can get those plot kink work out soon. As that story is one of my fav and I really wish to now what happens next.
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I now I really should not to do this but I have to now. Are you going to update To Hell and Back any time soon or have you got bored with it? If you can answer me the next time you update this fic that will be great or you can just delete this if you what to.
schedule October 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story

I'd very much like to become a beta reader for you.
I honestly think making hinata to be more an antagonistic type is a fresh idea
Makes for a far more interesting read.

person Anon
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice chapter, altough the format made it slightly hard to read.
person statnin
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice start so far!
now update soon and feed us some good shit ;)
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I need MORE!!! please write more... please. Naruto has to hook up wit Hinata
schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it, interesting story and character development. The grammar is a bit rough but it's not too bad. Keep it up and I'll look forward to future chapters.
person wheathermangohan
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Noooo that's can't be the end of the chapter!
I want More!
More I say!
Moooooore!
person Malice
schedule January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed Hinata actually having a backbone, even if she IS a complete bitch... its a nice change from her being "N-n-n-n-Naruto-kun." And passing out.
person honoric
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow...... now i really wan to know what happen to hinata , for her to become like that....... that was scary at hell to see her behave like that....