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for Rhythm & Bruise: Gaara's Story

by Darkprism

schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMFG CHAPTER NINE WINS AT WINNING YOU NEED TO DO IT AGAIN IT IS THE ALMIGHTY POWER OF AWESOMENESS!!!!!
person Carousel
schedule June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love all of your stories and I really, really, really, really wish you would pretty please write a Kakashi/Iruka story. Please?
person QueenofQuill
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved chapter 8. The story is unraveling slowly but at a good pace. I love the relationship between Gaara and Jody. It's a very touching relationship, if a little hard to define and it gives my heart strings a little tug.
schedule May 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
FUCK YES I WANTS MORE DIRTY GOODNESS. im in love with this fic and given the unique pairing im even more in love with it. also sweet jesus i think i got turned on right along with gaara when itachi got dominated. hellz yes! kiba is fantastically played cocky sure of himself fuckin smexy as hell... and gaara is to. i also like your writing style. the beginning of the story and how you drew the reader was unique and thr chapter where you introduced kiba was like who the fuck is it already!!! lol seriously i better see another chapter soon or i may go crazy... fuck kiba is a hotty... man... i think im a bit like gaara.... lol
person Anon
schedule May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
one thing i didn't point out on my y gal review is that gaara gets all soft and cuddly after he climaxes.....kiba is gonna love him some of that....and he got off on being called bitch???? who knew.....yeah little red kiba gonna make you his biotch!
person nivell
schedule May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated!!
person ahmenet
schedule May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I rarely write reviews ( a failing I admit) but I felt I need to let you know how much I have enjoyed your writing and this world you've created. I've never been a big Bleach fan but I enjoyed seeing the characters in your world and how much they behave as the originals do. I look forward to seeing your updates and thank you for creating such a fascinating, indepth and magnifecent world ( I really don't spell well either). I will attempt to better my efforts with reviews. Looking forward to the next installment of Gaara's story. You have my undivided attention. Thank you.
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW.

I don't think I even have it in me to write a scene like the one between Gaara and Jody. That was AMAZING! You pulled it off perfectly, I am impressed!

Now I wonder if between Jody's support and Kiba's insistence Gaara might manage to find his way back to him?

That would be sensational.
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I was so glad when I saw the update! I just love this fic! Loved this chapter too! Looking foward to some more!
person Jeni
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU for updating!