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for Rhythm & Bruise: Gaara's Story

by Darkprism

schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesome. makes note to check other stories.
person ejpt9999
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love this story when is the next update?
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, damn, and here he hadn't even had a chance to recover yeet.
person Carousel
schedule June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20 was lovely in so many ways. This story really tugs at my heart and I love it very much. The way Gaara and Kiba are portrayed is so raw it is nearly devastating. Please update soon.
person nivell
schedule April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Intense chapter. Kiba's really a bloody saint wanting to deal with Gaara's baggage...most people would run for the hills so I really admire Kiba here.
person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow... So intense chapter 19. Hm... what Gaara had to survive in his childhood is nod easy to conquer. Even after many decades, scars are always there.
person cynaga
schedule April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 19] WoW!
person Candy_Bar
schedule April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It feels like I've waited for chapter 19 for, like, years! =P But the wait sure was worth it! My god, the way you write, I can practically taste the pain, anxiety and utter desperation! It's so well written and so completely believable (like all of your stories). And we're talking about describing a severe psychosis here! I hope people understand what great writing skills that takes!

Let me also say that I'm in my fourth year of studying psychology at university, so my oppinion should count for at least something! =)
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
SAVED! Oh, thank GOD! But now what? I say, the tough stuff begins now. I sure hope Kiba is ready.

Gaara's pretty lucky eh? He's got Jody on one side and Kiba on the other, holding him up to the light. Bless them all.
person Carousel
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This last chaoter was so lovely. It was sad, raw, and sweet. You have got to be one of the greatest writers ever.