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for Rhythm & Bruise: Gaara's Story

by Darkprism

schedule October 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay! updaty goodness!
thankyou!
*bows politely in the authors direction.
Kiba and Gaara are such an interesting match.
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schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as always. <3

This story is getting so intense, but I'm glad for it. Poor Gaara is being all drowned by emotion. I'm hoping for some more of your fantastic smutty writing next chapter.
schedule September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was brilliant and once again you have inspired my inner muse to continue my own work, i thank you.

I was wondering as a writter if you were going to bring some of gaara's past into the present to show how much he has changed and i have loved this plot twist. Cant say i like this vince character, loathe really but a well thought out original character and he fees like a real rat.

Lookinf forward to updates from any of your stories, heck i've even started reading the bleach stuff, its good!
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMFG with the exception of the whole Vince and the Dogs things it all seemed so...normal.

What the hell is Kiba doing to Gaara and Jody?
person volaju66
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah so good but such a tease. I loved every moment of it. Your work never fails to amaze me for plot, story weaving, vivid imagery and in depth characters. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
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schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hehehe it was funny how Jody didn't see that Haku is a boy... but honestly it is really hard to know is he a boy because of his feminine look. Haku was so determined and consistent, I admire him. I really want to see how will Kiba and Gaara interact with each other. They are really unique couple.
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schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was brilliant! Gaara is finally kind of sort of warming up to Kiba, which is amazing. <3


You did fantastically as always and I can't wait for more.
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!
Gods above I was pulling out my hair waiting for this.
And you should make Haku and Jodi hook up, just once. -nod-
UPDATE SOON!
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow it sounds like kiba could be feeling just as empty as gaara,oh i wish i could writye them like you, this has inspred me to try and finish the new chapter for my fic by the weekend.

awsome stuff cant wait for an update heck i even read the other naruto stories for this even though i'm not a sasuke naruto fan! oh and i wonder what the favour kiba is doing for haku ^_^
schedule August 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It took me a bit longer to get into this story than into the other Monoshizukanohi tales but the Gaara character had really grown on me. He's so complex. It is fascinating to read. Thank you for sharing it.