rate_review Reviews

I absolutely adore this story. Your writing is amazing and the storyline fantastic. And don't even get me started on the ahem more mature scenes. Fantastic and I can't wait till you update again.

Please continue! I enjoy your style of writing very much, it is unique and very well done. It reminds of film noir, not a style I typically like, but you've surprised me on that end. I'll be waiting for more chapters; this story might well be my favorite.

By far the most compelling story I've read in years. Your writing skills are very fluid and masterful. The universe you've created, the city, the sights, the sounds......the feeling. Is all too real. Your take on the characters is raw and creative and frankly enthralling to read. All the details of your story are coherent and never once contradict themselves. This is really my favorite fanfic and by far one of the most interesting things I've read in my life. You would do well to continue honing your writing skills for surely they can take you as far as you want them to. I'll be waiting to see what happens next. Best of luck.

Still love it. Follow it on LiveJournal, but saw your update in the lineup, so hey. Thumbs up? *wiggles them*

out of all these stories i am definatly enjoying this one the most, looking forward to an update soon and dont be surprised if mistress shows up on livejournal some time soon

I laughed and I laughed and I laughed. I could hear Kakashi speaking with a Russian accent so clearly in my head. I love this story so much. <3 Please update soon.

WOW, Kiba's got it bad. Was happy when you showed Naruto, Sasuke and Kakashi.=)

Wow, Kiba is really in depression, it is so strange to see him like that...

Dearest Darkprism!
Absolutely love your chapters that involve crazy-and-deranged-radio-host-Kiba. It`s your hottest story yet with the sleaziest, darkest and most riveting pair in the Naruto fandom universe, and the way the radio ties in the other characters from your Monoshizukanohi is just superb writing well worth the time sacrifice. You are awesome and I have to say it`s like I want to keep myself connected to your world, guessing where the radio and Stryke will go next. Great exposition, interesting character-plot development and a lot of style in laying the words before the reader. Especially like your Kiba, with his exhibitionist streak, porning Radio Monoshizukanohi`s listeners with no shame, remorse or taboos, to their little black heart`s content. The way you write is so visual that I can see all this as a script and if I were to make it into a movie it would be along the lines of Wong Kar Wai cameraworks, Cohen brothers atmosphere and some Tarantino action, all in one super-package bordering on sadistically brilliant.
Here`s looking at you, kid.

Love,
Anna

I'm confused.