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I have been waiting for the next chapter! This chapter was really good. I really like the way you portray kiba. It's so different and I like the vibe he's got. Can't wait for what happens next!

This is an awesome story and I love your Kiba. So cool!
Keep going!!

Um.. I don't know if this loaded all the way. You should check and see. I hope you get this and figure it out.I want more!!!

Okay please, for the love of all things kinky, update soon. Update often. My god I have never been more addicted to a story, to a series of stories, TO AN AUTHOR, THAN I AM RIGHT FUCKING NOW. I need a fix. Like, soon. I reread at least one of your stories once a day. Literally. I've got them practically memorized by now, and it's still like reading them for the first fucking time every time I open the page. You're an amazing author, I LOVE the Mono series. Your Bleach stories had me about passing out from sheer joy at the thought that someone could write the characters so well. When I got into your Mono series, I never wanted it to end. It sucked me right in. I hope you have a lot more to write in this series. I'd love to see more on Naruto and Sasuke, I'd love to see MUCH more on Gaara and Kiba. Those two are definitely left out a lot when it comes to well written fanfiction. I can't even get my thoughts straight while typing this. I just want more, I desperately want more.


(Also, hopefully not at the expense of a Rhythm & Bruise chapter, I don't think anyone would be opposed to more Bleach fanfiction. Though to be terribly honest, your Mono series makes me want to bake you giant cookies and give you a back massage. ^_^)

As promised.... well maybe not for this fic....

Autant que je soies par le fait qu'une fois de plus, Kiba a été réduite à la dominer Alpha Dog, wouf wouf », écorce d'écorce, quoique non intentionnelle de votre part, j'ai été fait de se soumettre. Une fois il a laissé tomber cette ligne ou devrais-je dire mot, "Bitch", j'ai été réduit à la minauderie, bêta soumis à ses pieds; ventre vers le haut, le cou nu, et le corps en attente d'être Collard, et laisse à son appel invitent. Mmmhmm. Quoiqu'il en soit, chaque fois, dans la mesure Kibaaaaaaaaa!

L'ironie de Gaara appelant Kiba folle n'a pas été perdu pour moi non plus. En fait, je ri à haute voix à celui-là. Cependant, je vais attendre et voir comment ça se joue comme je suis trop concentré sur Kiba à ce stade de se prononcer sur notre petit rouquin. Bien, mon sourcil et a soulevé un sourire est apparu sur mon visage de la chaleur intense de Gaara légère "céder" une fois qu'il goûtait Kiba. Qu'est-ce que je n'aurais pas donné pour avoir été dans l'action. Mais hélas, comme je l'ai dit avant, vous me fournir une fenêtre sur la vie de ces personnages, et je suis un voyeur, mais .....

Hmmmm, mais pour votre Kiba, un hédoniste vrai et si pleine de passion, je serais heureux de me lécher les lèvres, glisser sur une duse de la chaîne à pointes, chaussures de maître baiser, et faire tout ce que papa a demandé.

And for those who do not understand.... Simply put.... I STICK TO MY GUNS WHEN I SAY THAT KIBA IS SIMPLY A BRILLIANT CHARACTER HERE IN THIS FIC....

...I really *want* to like this fic, because I love your Gaara characterisation, but I'm having a lot of trouble with Kiba's behaviour. Like, the guy who follows you to your car and physically blocks you from getting in, and then follows you to your place of work and hits on you there, and keeps doing it after you've told him to fuck off (or, y'know, stabbed him in the hand)? That's not sexy. That's when you call security and get on the phone to your lawyer about a restraining order.
Which is an odd reaction for me to have, actually, because normally I'm happy to read creepy dubcon. But I think because this isn't a PWP, because you've put so much effort into making your characters real and giving your fic a plot, I can't just suspend my normal reactions like I would for a PWP - I have to react how I would to someone who behaved that way in real life. And in real life, it's *not* sexy when someone refuses to take no for an answer.
I mean, this is actually a really good fic in an awful lot of ways, and I really do want to enjoy it. But Kiba's behaviour just keeps pinging me as "danger, get out *now*".

“Oh,” Kiba said like something disgusted him. Gaara took a step back, trying to find words. Then green eyes snapped up to meet his, and the look there was hungry.

“It’s on now, bitch,” Kiba snarled.

WIN WIN WIN!!!! Fuck yes! I was so freakin' happy to read that you have no idea. That was so sexy I couldn't believe it. Man I'm messed up... lol. Anyway when I saw you updated I had a girly squeel moment. Which i don't usually do. I'm pretty sure that I'm gonna have to reccomend you as someone people need to read. I love you're stories. XDD

Seriously, I'm a bit obsessed. So much so I'm starting to read your NejiShika stories and I'm not a huge fan of them but I just have to know now cuz your writing style just draws you in. Plus I want to know the other side of this story. Go Kiba get in Gaara's personal space and get dirty about it too. Gaara wants it we all know he does. >< So yeah. Hope to see another chapter soon, as I'm on the edge of my seat and I just have to get my next fix.

Later!
PS totally looking you up on livejournal.

Wow, I read chapter 8 and chapter 9, and I must say it was fantastic especially chapter 9 where it was really clash of ninjas. I can't wait to see what will happen next... :)

Again such a great chapter. I'm so glad I got to see all three of them in one room. It was so interesting. I kinda expected blood when I heard you say in the audio recording what was going to happen in this chapter. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Awesome chapter! Finally Kiba invades Gaara's personal space. =] I can't wait to see what happens to poor flustered Gaara.