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poor Sasuke, nothing seems to work well for him, ever.
at least he's got Neji ^^ The out of control Chakra was interesting. Hope we get some of Sasuke's oddities explained.
Really like the chapter a bit back that was in Sasuke's POV, it was a nice change, and really made the chapter stand out.
Hope the updates don't take to long!

mean mean Beta *growls*

that was short ... well since we don't have a choice we'll have to wait for the update.

I really like your story.

poor Sasuke ... hope Kakashi can fix you up.

aww Poor Sasuke! and poor Kakashi I guess...
Even if it was a bit short, it was a very interesting chapter.
Update soon! I love reading this story. It's a one of a kind.

I don't understand ... Sasuke apparently has feelings for Kakashi ... Kakashi shouldn't sleep with him even after making it clear that he's not intrested in Sasuke that way ... it would only make things worse for someone as fragile as Sasuke ... or is it that Kakashi has feelings for him that he won't acknowledge??

I liked that is stayed in character with the rest of the story. It wouldn't have felt right if they just jumped into something.

Lol, hey It's perfectly fine where you left off. It's a great place to do so. Really liked last two chapters - eh, I'm not much of a 'review every chapter' girl, so I hope you don't mind that. Doing good so far. Don't worry Kakashi seems to be pretty in character to me, and I'm hoping to see more of his revelations and more of the plot unfolding. ^^

Bah, was going to reply last chapter but got too caught up IRL lol. These last two chapters are great, even if you think they are rather icky. I know that feeling though haha, seeing as I am currently dealing with that situation as well. So far so good and peaking my interest still. Looking forward to your next issue ^^

Did he break the ting that Sasuke calls a heart with his monologue >.> That was a bit much, he knows that Sasuke reacts badly to not getting his way even if he doesn't show it. And he should think of it as more than sex. What about Sasu's collection of junk/scraps most centered around him :/
I'm looking forward to see where this goes/

Still loving this :D Gai particularly made me smile - I love how he just grins and muscles his way through awkwardness And oh man, awkwardness... Ha ha, poor Sauce, having to be on the receiving end of that conversation! But I also wonder if Kakashi's been leading him on a little, without realizing it? XD I kind of think he has. Ha ha, I don't imagine that Kakashi maintained eye contact the whole time Sasuke was standing there, damp and flushed and stretching before training XD And Sasuke might be a little off, but he's not entirely unobservant ^^

I look forward to more! :)

Ah, I love this very much :D I really enjoyed their conversation, about going to the memorial - it felt so tense, and at the same time it was kind of a relief to read. And then the actual visit made me happy :D I like how gradually you're making Kakashi understand Sasuke - and how gradually you're making Sasuke act anything approaching "normal." That last chapter, I felt like I let out a breath I'd been holding - after thirteen chapters of tension, the little bit more increased understanding made it feel like everything was *okay*. Love the part where Sasuke's walking in front of him... reeeeally love the part where Kakashi puts his hand where Sasuke's was at the door.

I'm enjoying this story so much!

(have you thought about posting up at y-gallery or LJ? It seems like the readers here are much less likely to review anything at all these days - and I know you're not writing for reviews, but I also know you like to talk about writing with people. And those sites make it a lot easier, especially since you can reply to comments and whatnot.)