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These three updates were good, and don't sound off, rushed or anything XD They sound perfectly fine to me. Probably a belated response too but I actually like it when relationships built and do not just rush into the smut (even though that's pretty good too. Good job so far ^^

Maybe your thinking of OCD? There's a lot that cause the whole "collect of things" disorder or "Compulsive Hoarding". I'd help you out but I'm not sure if your basing all of Sasuke of this disorder, or just this one chapter...
Good chapter other wise! We really are getting to see just how far gone Sasuke has become from his oldself. Are We going to get any flashbacks or such that explain a bit more on how Sasuke became of traumatized?

lol Sasuke reminds me of Smeagol with his little trinkets ^_^

Oh I'm really enjoying this story! read it all in one day. I love reading stories that show sasuke as having this sort of problem. I'm going to keep check, keep going!

This is so good!!! :D I've been neglecting my reading at aff, but now I'm getting caught up ^^ I'm up to chapter seven, and loving it :)

I love how Kakashi's slowly learning his way around Sasuke. Your Sasuke is so interesting to read - so broken and dangerous, but there's something about him that hints that he's not irredeemable. In this chapter, I especially liked the lines about Sasuke needing him, and how simple it was. Very powerful. And I love that Kakashi's had to nurse him back to health - ha ha, Kakashi as a nurse XD Their interaction in the hospital was really cool, too - I love Kakashi's dialogue, so cool and *Kakashi* in the midst of the tense, possibly dangerous situation.

Now I'm going to read more! I'm excited about them building a house XD

This story is interesting! I like the plot and whatnot, it also is very in character. It makes me envy how you can easily keep Kakashi in character while I always seem to have trouble with it (I'm currently editing the crap out of one of my fanfictions in order to keep Kakashi in character) I also agree with your opinion of Sasuke's character as well. I look forward to your next update ^^

I'm really enjoying this, and so excited to see a canon multichapter with these characters! I love the way Naruto took care of the prison situation. I also really dig the damaged, dangerous, somehow fragile way you write Sasuke's character - and Kakashi's reactions to him :) This is great!