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by Jelp

person moodysavage
schedule June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
he he he giggle giggle ... I totally thought it was serious. Love that it turned out to be sex play. And Sakura? lol hilarious.
person Timber
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PURE BLISS!!! :) Wicked Grin!! :) I really ENJOYED IT!! I just LOVE your stories!! I was thrilled when I looked you up to see if anything new was up!!! HAPPY HAPPY

I just love your style and creativity for character development and descriptions. You completely cover the details needed to picture how the characters feel and what they are going through.....which makes for feverish overload of the brain.....I think my brain just melted due to the amount of heat in this story!!!!

person SamuraiSaaya
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Phew! I was really scared for a moment that Sasuke was just one cruel bastard. But of course, it's just Naruto and Sasuke's foreplay. Nicely done, and the lemon scene was hot! Loved the caressing afterwards.

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schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahahhahaa/// Sakura is the best closet pervert of them all. heheheh


Keep up the great work!
person Repanse
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It may be PWP, but it's your PWP so it's still awesome :D P.S. Looking foward "To see your face" updates!
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, loved it. You're a genius.
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol Sakura passed out.