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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well... you COULD stop but then i will have to seek you out and torture you until you update again...(evil smile)
so yes, you got to continue the story.
about criticism, i can't really say anything.
this first chapter is very good and i didn't find anything were i can say 'now there you did something wrong', so all i can say is HURRY AND UPDATE!!!!!!
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!
so yes, you got to continue the story.
about criticism, i can't really say anything.
this first chapter is very good and i didn't find anything were i can say 'now there you did something wrong', so all i can say is HURRY AND UPDATE!!!!!!
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!
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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE! As soon as possible please, it's going great so far.