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October 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this
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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cute as hell.
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March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, so I read this all last night, and I absolutely loved it....and then it stopped. I was not expecting it to stop I wanted it to go on for a longer period because this story has such amazing potential. Please consider continuing it.
Syren
Syren
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March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just totally glomped your page on ygal...*loves hugs kisses your head hugs again* Thank you for more!!!
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March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! :D . Typical romantic Naruto to wait for Sasuke XD. Love the Kyuubi-Itachi pairing, it's great.
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March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I loved "Do Hearses Count.." to bits! Vintage cars and funerals-what's not to love? "Accidentally in Love" was quite adorable as well. And, of course "Bite Me"! I would be very interested in seeing a sequel. Since the boys can't feed off of each other anymore,a handsome stranger might just do the trick, don't you think? Just think of potential threesome candidates! There is teasing but expressionless twinkie Sai, Neji with his frustrating attutude, and, of course, good ole' wild Gaaara. Hell, one could even throw a few ladies into the mix. And then there is Kyuubi with Itachi. thgese two could do with Deidara or Kisame thrown their way, what do you think?
I happen to be full of ideas while being sub par at their execution. One very persistent one is a Ninjaverse story. If I had to write a summary, I'd say it was about Naruto growing up, coming of age, etc. Now what I find frustrating is that most writers explicitly state the shape form the get-go and hold onto it for dear life, if any and all competition demoted to episodic and stategic apprearances only while the reluctant lover is watching..Oh, and of course the encounter are always completely innocent with the other lover boy (usually Naruto) having no feelings or intentions for said "competition". But real life isn't like that. One usually goes through loves and heartbreaks multiple times. What I would like t osee written some day is an exploration of how Naruto discovered and came to terms with his bisexuality. The logic place to start with would be with Sai, what with his ridiculous accusations and challenges. Realistically speaking, I don't see naruto going past making out with Sai. At first, Naruto would be freaked out and weirded out. But I think Naruto could eventually make poeace with the fact that attractive men are attractive and that their attention (physical included) isn't necessarily unpleasant while Sai unfreezer a bit and learns to feel again. then I can see Naruto's adventure taking him to Suna. And there is Gaara there to address all that they had in common before and all that was lost and what is left over now. Matsuri is obssessed and overbearing. Naruto I can see taking the time to slowly coax Gaara out of his shell, getting him used to touching and being touched in return. To me, Naruto eventually being Gaara's first time makes sense. Only I think it would probably be oral only-because of how new and uncertain the whole thing would be for the both of them. Undoubtedly, Naruto would be questioning his masculinity-i see a nice intelude of Naruko with, say, Neji quite fitting. I think Neji would come around for seconds..this time for Naruto in his male form. Neji is a man of technique, which can be nicely reflected in how he gives head. There are quite a few techniques that go into it that are generally glossed over in most fanfics. And Neji has enough repressed sex drive to possibly go all the way. And then, of course, there is Sasuke with his bleeding emotional wounds. By that time, Naruto would have to learn how to take care of people, how to read them. Sasuke has so much grief, pain and regret stored deep inside of him - saving him involves so much more than bringing him back or saving him form jail. I am positive he would get very bristly at the idea of being intimate with Naruto. It would also be interesting to see a Sasuke who has had sexual encounters with women before. And I mean to see his encounters described. If nothing else, he is a man with a purpose and a plan and seeing how convincing a woman to bear a dozen kids is easier if sex is plesurable, practice would be required. Karin, maybe? Because the girl needs to be cured of her obsession big time, and nothing sex with Sasuke-mechanical, technical....or maybe plain bad..could drive this point home quite nicely.
Shutting up now! Keep writing!
~Kat
I happen to be full of ideas while being sub par at their execution. One very persistent one is a Ninjaverse story. If I had to write a summary, I'd say it was about Naruto growing up, coming of age, etc. Now what I find frustrating is that most writers explicitly state the shape form the get-go and hold onto it for dear life, if any and all competition demoted to episodic and stategic apprearances only while the reluctant lover is watching..Oh, and of course the encounter are always completely innocent with the other lover boy (usually Naruto) having no feelings or intentions for said "competition". But real life isn't like that. One usually goes through loves and heartbreaks multiple times. What I would like t osee written some day is an exploration of how Naruto discovered and came to terms with his bisexuality. The logic place to start with would be with Sai, what with his ridiculous accusations and challenges. Realistically speaking, I don't see naruto going past making out with Sai. At first, Naruto would be freaked out and weirded out. But I think Naruto could eventually make poeace with the fact that attractive men are attractive and that their attention (physical included) isn't necessarily unpleasant while Sai unfreezer a bit and learns to feel again. then I can see Naruto's adventure taking him to Suna. And there is Gaara there to address all that they had in common before and all that was lost and what is left over now. Matsuri is obssessed and overbearing. Naruto I can see taking the time to slowly coax Gaara out of his shell, getting him used to touching and being touched in return. To me, Naruto eventually being Gaara's first time makes sense. Only I think it would probably be oral only-because of how new and uncertain the whole thing would be for the both of them. Undoubtedly, Naruto would be questioning his masculinity-i see a nice intelude of Naruko with, say, Neji quite fitting. I think Neji would come around for seconds..this time for Naruto in his male form. Neji is a man of technique, which can be nicely reflected in how he gives head. There are quite a few techniques that go into it that are generally glossed over in most fanfics. And Neji has enough repressed sex drive to possibly go all the way. And then, of course, there is Sasuke with his bleeding emotional wounds. By that time, Naruto would have to learn how to take care of people, how to read them. Sasuke has so much grief, pain and regret stored deep inside of him - saving him involves so much more than bringing him back or saving him form jail. I am positive he would get very bristly at the idea of being intimate with Naruto. It would also be interesting to see a Sasuke who has had sexual encounters with women before. And I mean to see his encounters described. If nothing else, he is a man with a purpose and a plan and seeing how convincing a woman to bear a dozen kids is easier if sex is plesurable, practice would be required. Karin, maybe? Because the girl needs to be cured of her obsession big time, and nothing sex with Sasuke-mechanical, technical....or maybe plain bad..could drive this point home quite nicely.
Shutting up now! Keep writing!
~Kat
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Is that the ending though? It would be okay but I really want it to continue a bit more cause I loved the change in this story. I wanna know what happens between Naruto and Sasuke some more and how Sasuke reached his decision and what happens after Naruto comes down from his "high"... continue please?
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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter!! Please continue!!
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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I cannot WAIT for the second part *licks lips* this is so yummy.. I wish it had more blood and sex stories..they are so separate mostly
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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like, I like, I like. Vampires! Long time since I've last read one of those..
Love possesive seme Naruto, for some reason it's a rare thing. Please continue soon :)
Love possesive seme Naruto, for some reason it's a rare thing. Please continue soon :)